FDK: Shattered Illusions - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

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Great chapter! That was some revelation. Hopefully Lois isn’t too mad. Clark did save her life. I can’t wait for next Friday! I love this universe! Thanks!

Wow. That was intense.
I wonder if Houdini is sticking with Lois until he returns....
Can't wait to see what happens next! I hope Lois takes it well and can help him get a hold of his powers

Gaaahhhh! Can Ficlet Friday also be on Monday and Wednesday? I need to find out what happens! D:

Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes

Gaaahhhh! Can Ficlet Friday also be on Monday and Wednesday? I need to find out what happens! D:

I second this!

Great chapter. Can't wait for Friday!

Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes

Gaaahhhh! Can Ficlet Friday also be on Monday and Wednesday? I need to find out what happens! D:]

Wow, that's some compliment. Thank you very much. But I really wouldn't know how I am supposed to write three parts a week. So you have got to content with Ficlet Friday, I'm afraid.

Originally Posted by Blueowl

Wow. That was intense.
I wonder if Houdini is sticking with Lois until he returns....
Can't wait to see what happens next!

Well, I'll give away as much as the title of next week's installment. "The Magic of Dogs". As for what happens after that, I'm not so sure. I guess I'll find out next Thursday, if I'm lucky enough to have my day off and there's no strike in kindergarten and my son is healthy.

Thank you all so much for bearing with me through this little adventure

Hi Barbara!

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His tail flopped up and down a few times until the tired dog stopped moving altogether. Clark shook his head with an amused smile and knelt down next to the setter. He scratched his head. "I take it you're done for the day."

Awww, just like Lois after she's done chasing after Superman all day and then comes back home to Clark.

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Clark had spent what was left of his days walking around the Southside, trying to find the hideout of the Toasters.

All he needs to do is listen for Lois’s heartbeat. He’ll learn…

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Before Clark had a chance to come up with a solution to his dilemma, his ears picked up a familiar heartbeat. It was racing, accompanied by muffled panicked gasps.

See? Crime detector up and running.

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What was she doing in the Southside so late at night?

Acting as bait.

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His mind started to race as he realized what he'd just done, coming up with half-baked excuses.

Concussion. Yes, she got caught in the blast and got a concussion.

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Recognition dawned on Lois' face. Down below, Houdini barked a warning that came much too late.

/Points at yet another great title choice/

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A cry was ripped from his lungs and when the burst finally subsided, he limply fell from the sky. As Clark hit the ground, he knew no more.

Amnesia?

You really are letting us hang here all week until the next Illusion?

Michael

Originally Posted by Toomi8

Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes

Gaaahhhh! Can Ficlet Friday also be on Monday and Wednesday? I need to find out what happens! D:

I second this!

Great chapter. Can't wait for Friday!

Third! This is my Friday fix--and it's even low calorie!

Originally Posted by Shallowford

Third! This is my Friday fix--and it's even low calorie!

Thank you so much. It's nice to know you're still reading. Next Friday is just three days from now. And since I'm several hours ahead of you, it might even still be Thursday.

DarthMichael, I'm glad you approve of my titles.

I’m finally catching up! And OMG… GAHHHHHH! What? I kinda love that he couldn’t explain things away! But now how long is he going to hide from her? When will we find out what’s up with the hiccups and how they’re linked to Houdini?? Good thing I have a few more to read…

Sara

It seems that Clark can never catch a break! The poor man wants a social life, but due to these hiccups it is denied him. Will there be a resolution soon?

That was some reveal! Lois shouldn’t be angry with him since they are not as close as in canon.

So glad there are a bunch more installments to read!

Originally Posted by Morgana

Will there be a resolution soon?

I'd say that depends on what you want to have resolved... But I believe you will enjoy the fallout from this revelation. Everyone else did so far. This isn't one of my darker tales and I try to keep it as light as I can.

Thanks so much for reading.