FDK: Written in the Stars 19/30 - 06/18/22 01:33 PM
Isn't this better than just having him cancel his trip? 
Re: FDK: Written in the Stars 19/30 - 06/18/22 02:33 PM
Far better. Come back with more soon. This chapter was fantastic. Loved every line of it
Re: FDK: Written in the Stars 19/30 - 06/18/22 03:12 PM
WHAT?! <insert me gasping for breath here>
He’s there, in the newsroom?? And she’s running to him. Ahhhh!! And this story is so amazing. And I don’t have time for coherent fdk right now but I HAD to drop these few lines to say:
1. I love you for writing this story.
2. I dislike immensely that you left us right there.
Also, I reserve this space to come back and post better fdk later when I have a minute. Come back quick with that next chapter!!
He’s there, in the newsroom?? And she’s running to him. Ahhhh!! And this story is so amazing. And I don’t have time for coherent fdk right now but I HAD to drop these few lines to say:
1. I love you for writing this story.
2. I dislike immensely that you left us right there.
Also, I reserve this space to come back and post better fdk later when I have a minute. Come back quick with that next chapter!!
Re: FDK: Written in the Stars 19/30 - 06/18/22 04:19 PM
OMG! Lois did not have to be kidnaped or fall from a window to have Clark return. In the NEWSROOM !!!
THAT will show you.unbelivers.
THAT will show you.unbelivers.
Re: FDK: Written in the Stars 19/30 - 06/18/22 09:17 PM
I’ve completely melted into a pile of goo. So much better than him staying. Love the teasing from Cat and Jimmy who obviously are doing it because they care. Please hurry back with the next chapter.
Re: FDK: Written in the Stars 19/30 - 06/19/22 01:52 AM
This chapter is fantastic. I can’t wait for cats reaction.
Re: FDK: Written in the Stars 19/30 - 06/19/22 04:55 AM
Okay, from now on, “Annie is always right”! 'Cause the last 2 chapters have indeed made up for that momentary melancholy inflicted upon us with that goodbye in chapter 17! 
But leaving us here is about more than we can stand…….
Where is that next chapter to this incredible story?
But leaving us here is about more than we can stand…….
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He was here………He smiled at her – a tentative, nervous smile – as if he wasn’t sure his unexpected appearance would be welcome. And she remembered that he had been sending his letters on faith, with no indication of her response to them.
She had just been thinking of him, longing for him. And now he was here. He was really here.
“Oh my god,” she whispered………..Every cell in her body was focused on him. She stood, still sluggish with shock, and he shrugged as if to say he couldn’t believe he was there either. He didn’t approach, just waited for her, and she realized suddenly he was still waiting for her answer. And then she started to run.
She had just been thinking of him, longing for him. And now he was here. He was really here.
“Oh my god,” she whispered………..Every cell in her body was focused on him. She stood, still sluggish with shock, and he shrugged as if to say he couldn’t believe he was there either. He didn’t approach, just waited for her, and she realized suddenly he was still waiting for her answer. And then she started to run.
Where is that next chapter to this incredible story?
Re: FDK: Written in the Stars 19/30 - 06/19/22 01:03 PM
Originally Posted by Penny_Lane
Okay, from now on, “Annie is always right”! '
I'm going to get that embroidered on a pillow or something.
Seriously, so glad everyone loved this part. And I know it was a cruel place to end, but the next chapter is up now!