Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 02:31 AM
This is great! Lois is realising what a real catch Clark is! I really love how you are having Lucy really play with Lois' heart.
Finish it ASAP
Finish it ASAP
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 03:03 AM
Lois is particularly cute when she's in denial. *g*
Loved your description of Lois' POV on the doctored picture. *sigh*
Yep, still wanna give Lois a hug.
Such wonderful, absorbing writing, Nicole. Can't wait for the next part.
Loved your description of Lois' POV on the doctored picture. *sigh*
Yep, still wanna give Lois a hug.
Such wonderful, absorbing writing, Nicole. Can't wait for the next part.
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 03:16 AM
Can I just repeat what Incognito said here? (And hey... why are there no "hug" icons?) 
Ann
Ann
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 03:50 AM
I am enjoying this story...the Lucy character is very believable. And hilarious too. Poor Lois! Please Post more soon!
Marcy
Marcy
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 04:31 AM
Hey!
I just caught up with this story, and I must say, I'm really liking it! It's so nice to see Lois suffering for such good reasons
(as opposed to the 'I-have-less-than-24-hours-left-to-live kind of suffering 
)
And Lucy's plans are just so good. I'm really looking forward to the last two parts of this story
I just caught up with this story, and I must say, I'm really liking it! It's so nice to see Lois suffering for such good reasons
(as opposed to the 'I-have-less-than-24-hours-left-to-live kind of suffering )And Lucy's plans are just so good. I'm really looking forward to the last two parts of this story
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 04:35 AM
this story rocks! Can't wait for more
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 11:43 AM
Expecting the next part eagerly!! 
Jose
Jose
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 01:53 PM
Really, really looking forward to the next part.
And poor Lois, I'm kind of feeling bad for her.
I'm also curious about Clark's reaction
And poor Lois, I'm kind of feeling bad for her.
I'm also curious about Clark's reaction
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 04:33 PM
I actually feel sorry for Lois LOL! Love it. More soon. Laura
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 05:28 PM
Hi,
Great part.
Love it.
More ASAP, please.
MAF
Great part.
Love it.More ASAP, please.
MAF
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 05:52 PM
This story just keeps getting better!
Never a good sign.
Awww. Wait until you see he was looking at YOU, Lois.
That does seem to be the trend with Lois...
You love him, Lois...we all know it
Too true.
I also liked how you had her writing about Superman and switching to Clark. If that doesn't show who her thoughts are moving to, I don't know what does. Great job. Can't wait for the next part!
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And… she was calling him “Kent.”
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Clark’s eyes… “I saw it.”
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She needs to be hit over the head with the facts,
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“I’ll agree with you there. He has a wonderful smile.”
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Pretending was bad…
Lucy looked at Lois.
…Yet that was how she lived her life.
Lucy looked at Lois.
…Yet that was how she lived her life.
I also liked how you had her writing about Superman and switching to Clark. If that doesn't show who her thoughts are moving to, I don't know what does. Great job. Can't wait for the next part!
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/05/05 07:57 PM
Just saw this story for the first time this afternoon & caught up on all three parts. All I can say is: Poor Lois! and Lucy is brilliant!
eagerly awaiting the next part!
Shells
eagerly awaiting the next part!
Shells
Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK - 12/06/05 12:25 AM
Hello
Thank you guys so much for all your feedback! It means so much to me!!
I'm glad so many of you commented about Lois's reaction to the doctored photo... as Incognito pointed out, she is cute when she's in denial and her heart's just being ripped out of her chest and stomped all over...
uh.... um.... :rolleyes: ... I mean, it pains me, too, to see her that way... thank goodness there's only 2 more parts
Capes wrote:Thank you!! I'm glad you liked that! It definitely shows where her thoughts are at
Cristina wrote:Wendy, if you're reading this, do you see how you're affecting everyone? This story gets attention in the feedback for most stories on the board right now!! Speaking of which... when do we get the next part???
Okay, thank you, EVERYONE for the wonderful comments that have made my day!!! Part 4 coming up now!!!!!!!!!!!!
~NICOLE
Thank you guys so much for all your feedback! It means so much to me!!
I'm glad so many of you commented about Lois's reaction to the doctored photo... as Incognito pointed out, she is cute when she's in denial and her heart's just being ripped out of her chest and stomped all over...
uh.... um.... :rolleyes: ... I mean, it pains me, too, to see her that way... thank goodness there's only 2 more parts Capes wrote:
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I also liked how you had her writing about Superman and switching to Clark. If that doesn't show who her thoughts are moving to, I don't know what does. Great job.
Cristina wrote:
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It's so nice to see Lois suffering for such good reasons (as opposed to the 'I-have-less-than-24-hours-left-to-live kind of suffering )
(as opposed to the 'I-have-less-than-24-hours-left-to-live kind of suffering ) Speaking of which... when do we get the next part??? Okay, thank you, EVERYONE for the wonderful comments that have made my day!!! Part 4 coming up now!!!!!!!!!!!!
~NICOLE