Feedback thread for A Dangerous Mind part 6 - 11/25/21 04:54 AM
Re: Feedback thread for A Dangerous Mind part 6 - 11/26/21 02:36 AM
Welcome back! So glad you are posting this latest entry. 
With one line you have set the tone for this chapter. I feel so sad for everyone!
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She knows that these people are supposed to be her family, as she would have to be blind to not see the mirroring of her features in their faces. Especially the young girl, her little sister apparently, who is standing across the room looking as lost and confused as she feels.
With one line you have set the tone for this chapter. I feel so sad for everyone!
Re: Feedback thread for A Dangerous Mind part 6 - 11/26/21 05:54 AM
I just joined this story. It sounds amazingly intriguing. Please post the links to chapters 1-5.
Re: Feedback thread for A Dangerous Mind part 6 - 11/26/21 08:39 AM