part 3

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What an intriguing story! Keep writing, and I’ll keep reading.

Do not stop! This is a good story and deserves to be written and read! The very idea that the Kents have been denied their child all these years is heartbreaking.

I am a little surprised there is not more emotion between Clark and Lara. Shock, horror and downright anger come to mind. How is Lois going to deal with seeing her baby, now half-grown. There are so many avenues you can go down here. I for one await the next chapter.