FDK: Empire Chapter Four of Four - 04/25/20 09:35 PM
Final chapter! 
Comments are welcome.
Comments are welcome.
Re: FDK: Empire Chapter Four of Four - 04/26/20 09:31 PM
Great ending to this tale! What a unique take. Loved how Aykira with help from our favorite time traveler changed Lex's life. The epilogue is especially pleasing with the headlines and the stories' first paragraphs, especially the last one.
Well done!
Well done!
Re: FDK: Empire Chapter Four of Four - 05/03/20 12:02 AM
Cuidadora
Thanks Cuidadora! Your comment was much appreciated! It was time for Lex and Aykira to get together in the alternative universe without Lex being ill or Aykira bearing a grudge. Writing the epilogue in this way got the point across without writing additional chapters. It was neat to see that Aykira's relationship with Lois had grown to the point where the young reporter was the Maid of Honor at the Luthor/Milan wedding. Talk about a twist! The last headline was the absolute best way to wrap up the story.
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Great ending to this tale! What a unique take. Loved how Aykira with help from our favorite time traveler changed Lex's life. The epilogue is especially pleasing with the headlines and the stories' first paragraphs, especially the last one.
Well done! clap clap
Well done! clap clap
Thanks Cuidadora! Your comment was much appreciated! It was time for Lex and Aykira to get together in the alternative universe without Lex being ill or Aykira bearing a grudge. Writing the epilogue in this way got the point across without writing additional chapters. It was neat to see that Aykira's relationship with Lois had grown to the point where the young reporter was the Maid of Honor at the Luthor/Milan wedding. Talk about a twist! The last headline was the absolute best way to wrap up the story.