FDK:Hearts United-Part 3 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Hi,

Great part.

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Not that she knew many candidates; the only one that came to mind was Bill. She'd always thought there was a spark between them, but neither one of them had ever acted on it.

Is this Bill Henderson?

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"Let's hit the courthouse," he finished for her. "Okay. After you, m'lady."

At night?

More ASAP, please.

MAF

Uh-oh! Kal's planning on going off to destroy Nightfall! Thinks it's going to be no big deal, too... anyone else think he's just a little too cocky and self-assured right now? This is worrying...

And he definitely needs a costume.

Just rushing in to help without any kind of disguise smacks of... carelessness.

Or just a very strong Boy Scout tendency.

Don't think I missed that tiny snippet in the Francine passage, either. No man interests her now... except Bill... and there's only one Bill I can think of, isn't there? My favourite supporting character.

[img]http://images12.fotki.com/v237/photos/1/11220/95599/Henderson-vi.jpg?352264[/img]

So, come on, am I right? And do I smell a romance?

Wendy

Pam

An excellent part!

and look forward to reading more.

Tricia

Okay, the Kal and Lois stuff was great - things are moving ahead, Supermanish challenges to deal with, The Coming Threat, and all spiced with a nice bit of L& C banter.

But the big news is that brief mention of ... Bill

So my suggestion at this point ... put the the soon to be Mr & Mrs.Ellison and the Space Rock on the back burner (but definitely not off the stove!!)

and...

Give us the Bill Henderson and Francine Story!!! please

c

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He considered contradicting her, then decided to let it slide. It was more important to lessen her worry than to badger her into admitting to it.

Clever man

That little touch with "m'lady" was still great. You can't just forget the fact that you almost ruled a planet after all!

Yippee!!!! (Nothing specific...just yippee that it's a great Pam sequel!)

Sherry

(just completed reading parts 1,2 and 3)

Very interesting comeback of the HD universe.

Perry White in the army is an interesting twist with regards to both Nightfall and Trask.

And, tell Francine and Brenda hello for me

Looking forward to the marriage license

~Ankit