So this idea just kinda spawned today. What happens when you trap Lois and Clark in an elevator instead of letting them make the same mistakes time and time again?

Lights Out!

All comments are welcome!

Awwwwwwwwwww!
That was sweet and wonderful

'The End'? I suppose it is the end of them making the same mistakes over and over again.
But still, I hope there's a part two for this :p

That was great! Will there be a part 2?? I hope, I hope!

Hmmm. Lois took that reveal awfully well. I wish you had given us a little bit of her thought processes, but I'm sure you'll give that to us in "Lights Back On" sometime this week.

That's the part two clamored for above. I also think it should be coming soon. This is just the prologue to something very interesting.

I agree with the others. This is far from over with Lois. So...sequel, yes?

Overall, a fun little story and a nice reveal to boot!

Yay, a reveal! And such a sweet one too! I'm joining the crowd clamoring for some followup

Very nice!

Come back here and give us a sequel!

Please?

Lovely story with a nice revelation. A sequel, pretty please?

Hey Feli!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed my little snippet. scans rest of thread Hmm, there seems to be a common theme here.

I echo all thoughts! Needs a sequel

Hey BlueOwl!

It is the end of the secrets at least.... There's not a part two. Just a one part on this fic. I may do a companion one later.

Part 2?

What is this thing you speak of?

I'm kidding there will probably be a companion piece just not at this time. (Hides from rotten tomatoes)

What a sweet little story! Great revelation! I agree I’d like to see where is goes from here.

Hey Terry,

I suppose you might be right. I mean it would be cruel to leave it up to the reader to imagine how Lois and Clarks conversation post-reveal might go.

We will see what happens.

Hey Vicki!



So glad you enjoyed the little tale. Why does everyone keep talking about a part 2? I can't figure that out....

I suppose I could be tempted...or pursuaded to do a companion piece but I've got enough irons in the fire at the moment. We'll see what happens.

Hey E!

So glad you liked the reveal. It was fun playing with these two and forcing Clark into a tight spot.

Yeah, yeah I hear the shouting in the back there... We'll see

Thanks scifiJoan! So glad you liked it.

Hey cuidadora

Thanks so much. Glad you liked the reveal.

I'm sensing a theme here.

Hey Crazy_Babe

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

sounds like everyone has spoken. I'll see what I can come up with

Hey jackiek!

So glad you enjoyed this little tale. Glad you liked the revelation. I'll probably do a companion piece later on. We'll see what happens.