This is the perfect conclusion, Shayne. I'm really sorry that I didn't get time to read it when you emailed it to me, but it wouldn't have made any difference. This can't possibly be improved on, and anything I would have had to say would only go to your head.
You wrapped up all the loose ends so well. I know you were concerned about how to end the story, how to deal with Clark's demons and where he and Lois were going from here. The A-plot is nicely finished. The people of Smallville know he's not a murderer. He's made his peace with Rachel. All that is great. He's working out at the Planet - and I like Lois's assertion that 'he's that good'. Nice one, Lois!
The therapy group felt so real, so well done - but then, given your background, that's not surprising. You haven't given us a healed Clark - that would be unrealistic - but you've set him on the path to healing. This, in particular, shows that:
“The only thing is...I’ve finally met someone who makes me want to be a man, who makes me want to stop running and finally restart my life. And I’m not sure how to start.”
The therapist, a tall, bearded man said “I think you just did.”
Yes. Just right.
Then that final conversation with Lois took us all the way back to the beginning of the story - which, as Nan said, was very different from the way it ended up. And Anne's right too: this is exactly what you did in Dear Lois: gave us what looked like the start of a romantic/angsty/WAFFy story, but then turned it into a complex, involved, dramatic rollercoaster full of villains and unexpected twists and blind alleys. The reminder of their original blind date was lovely, and I had to laugh when Clark ended up confessing that it hadn't been so 'blind' after all.
Loved her version of the ad, by the way!
I'm so glad you're back, and writing again, Shayne. Congratulations on finally finishing this, and please hurry up with your next story!
I've been a terrible BR, I know, but when you can come up with plots and twists like these you don't need anyone holding your hand.
Wendy