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Posted By: Endelda FDK: The Muppets Take Metropolis (1/1) - 02/08/19 09:44 AM
Hello, thanks so much for reading! I hope you liked it! [Linked Image]
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That was hysterical. Thank you for posting it.

I suspected right from the beginning that all was not as it seemed when Kermit was doing a Sesame Street-style sketch on The Muppet Show. From there, I settled back and enjoyed the wild ride as the story kept getting better and better.

If ever you wished to write a sequel, I would just love to hear how the next conversation goes.
Posted By: Endelda Re: FDK: The Muppets Take Metropolis (1/1) - 02/08/19 10:13 AM
Thanks Lynn! I thought about keeping it true to Sesame Street, but I don't know Elmo from my Elbow and the muppets I know best are way too anachronistic for our Superman to be appearing as a guest. The rest just sort of flowed from there.
Posted By: scifiJoan Re: FDK: The Muppets Take Metropolis (1/1) - 02/08/19 02:21 PM
That was fun!
Well, that was funny. I began to realize that something weird goes on when Clark appeared on-screen and the trust conversation began. Funny little story. Would love to read Clark's reaction when he finds out HOW Lois found out the secret.
Great story, E! clap

Talk about Truth in Television! wink
Posted By: cuidadora Re: FDK: The Muppets Take Metropolis (1/1) - 02/08/19 08:10 PM
What a delightful, fun story! Lois's head may be spinning now, but Clark's will be soon. clap lol

Would also love to see what happens next. Great job! hyper
Hahaha, what a fun, funny little tale! I love how he kept popping up more and more Clark-like in Lois' mind. But, you know what they say, the camera never lies! Great story!
Posted By: Endelda Re: FDK: The Muppets Take Metropolis (1/1) - 02/10/19 12:03 AM
Originally Posted by scifiJoan
That was fun!
Thanks Joan, I had a lot of fun writing it!

Originally Posted by BlindPassenger
Well, that was funny. I began to realize that something weird goes on when Clark appeared on-screen and the trust conversation began. Funny little story.
Thanks BP, I was trying to leave enough bread crumbs around that even non-muppet fans would be able to tell something was up goofy

Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes
Great story, E! clap
Thank you, Your Majesty! [Linked Image]

Originally Posted by cuidadora
What a delightful, fun story! Lois's head may be spinning now, but Clark's will be soon. clap rotflol
Hehehe, thank you cuidadora!

Originally Posted by Deadly Chakram
Hahaha, what a fun, funny little tale! I love how he kept popping up more and more Clark-like in Lois' mind. But, you know what they say, the camera never lies! Great story!
Thanks DC! I was trying to have Superman be more and more Clark-like, and of course Clark had his SuperMoment, but I was also trying to have the bear become more and more of a blend of the two. I hope that came through!

Originally Posted by Lynn S. M.
If ever you wished to write a sequel, I would just love to hear how the next conversation goes.
Originally Posted by BlindPassenger
Would love to read Clark's reaction when he finds out HOW Lois found out the secret.
Originally Posted by cuidadora
Would also love to see what happens next.
Honestly when I wrote this I wasn't thinking about a sequel at all. No promises, but I'm definitely thinking about it now! wink
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: The Muppets Take Metropolis (1/1) - 02/11/19 08:34 PM
The flu had me in its grip when I first tried to read this charming little story. It had me crying from laughing so hard! I absolutely loved Pigs in Space!

Thanks for the smile!
Posted By: Endelda Re: FDK: The Muppets Take Metropolis (1/1) - 02/12/19 06:41 AM
Thanks Morgana! I'm glad you're feeling better, and that you found my story charming smile

Piiiiiiigs Iiiiiiin Spaaaaace! goofy
lol clap This was so much fun! At first I was wondering what a muppet show featuring Superman would be like, but then it spiraled out of control so quickly! I was rolling!

Also love the inclusion of Clarkie Bear and how he got the glass and cape halfway through. rotflol

All in all, very well done! I'd also love to see the conversation, especially if she's still a little disoriented from the dream and confusing things ("Kermit said he trusted you!!"), but I think you ended it in the exact right spot.
Posted By: Endelda Re: FDK: The Muppets Take Metropolis (1/1) - 03/02/19 09:35 AM
Oops, just saw this. Thank you Mouse! Yay you caught Clarkie Bear's evolving wardrobe!

No promises, but I'm still thinking about a sequel
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