It didn’t exactly roll naturally off her tongue, the way she’d always expected her new name to do once she married. She remembered how easily “Mrs. Lois Swayze” had bounced off her tongue as she and her girlfriends had fantasized about marrying their crushes. It had seemed so natural. So how come it felt so awkward trying out her fiancé’s last name now? Perhaps if she couched it in a different way?

I love it! Yay for Clark dodging the cage and yay for Lois and her sign! Of course, I'm curious how these changes will affect the rest of the canon, especially how Lois will deal with amnesiac Clark and creepy Lex when she knows that the Almighty himself doesn't ship Lois/Lex.

Oh boy, you sure played with the timeline and you played with it very well. I like it and how Mike and God helped Lois see her way.

They say to be careful what you pray for, because you just might get it...

<chuckle> Well done.

Joy,
Lynn

I may have been a bit heavy handed with the stubbornness on that one indeed.

Nice take on that challenge. Glad Clark was able to avoid the Kryptonite cage and hopefully Lois will take a closer look at things knowing God Almighty himself doesn't want her to marry Lex Luthor.

Thanks for the laugh, Vicki.

Mrs. Patrick Swayze? Talk about reaching high! Still I can see Lois and that awesome dancer doing a fantastic Mamba on the floor of the High School gymnasium.

Haha, he gave her so much stubbornness that it takes an asteroid to counter it? Golly...

This somehow requires an epilogue or something! What would Lois do once she realises that an asteroid is headed for earth?

I did not see that coming. Well done!

I've read about the expression "knocking some sense into someone", but Lois is truly unique!
A very enjoyable (and surprising!) fic.