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This story is 6 chapters, a prologue and an epilogue, and we'll be posting once a week.

Be nice to Endelda, it's her first L&C fanfic

Okay, holy moly you two!

Notes for the Authors:

Endelda,



Congrats on your first story. I'm very proud of you and you're off to a great start and in wonderful hands with Feli helping you through the process.

Feli,

Another job well done of setting the stage. I'm glad to see you posting again.


Notes on the Story:

That being said, I'm confused on who Stephens is. I'm guessing he's a thug of Luthor's sent to take care of Joshua Cox? Very intrigued and looking forward to your next chapter next week.

Thanks Val! *blush*

Yes, you find out more about who Stephens is and why he's important in the next chapter

Woohoo! It's already posting day? I can't believe it! And what a start!

As one of the lonely souls who hasn't (yet) been pulled into the lure of Lucifer fabdom, I'm very interested to see where this goes! The mystery of it all and merging the timelines where you have adds to the intrigue. Lois and Clark after fly hard, in modern times? Awesome! I can't wait to see where Lucifer and Chloe come in to play. Wonder how true the saying "better the devil you know" goes when it comes down to Lex or the actual devil...

Also excited to see a piece of Mrs. Cox's backstory. The inclusion of a husband or ex husband is a fascinating addition. Can't wait to see where this leads, and who the mysterious Stephens is, and how they all end up bumping into each other.

Great start! And (did I say this already? I don't think I said this already...) Congratulations!!!! first post for E and another great start for NK! Can't wait to keep reading!

Finally getting a chance to respond...

Val- thanks! Personally, I think E did a fantastic job. And it feels good to write again! As E said, more will be revealed about Stephens soon.

Mouse- Hehehe, watch out or I'll suck you into the Lucifer fandom as well I'm glad we've managed to intrigue you- let's hope we can keep that up!

Next post will be from Endelda, so watch out for it next Friday (US time).

Congrats on first story. Started off with a nicely written scene that drew me in for next chapter. Big fan of both shows so I’m excited for this one. Thanks for writing.

Thanks Andy! We hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much as we enjoyed writing it, and that you like the way we ended up blending the shows together.

Hi Feli and Endela!

I’m a Lucifer fan, too. And given that they even had an angel on the show makes this for a very opportune crossover.

LUCIFER: Oh goodie, *two* more humans that will be seeing my devil-face.
EDIT: okay, I forgot that 3x22 was *not* the season finale

Oh, Mrs. Cox brought her work home?

So, two new renters for the AirBnB down below?

That was a very novel way to kick things off. Or as a back story Mrs. Cox. What a wretched hive of scum and villainy you two have created here in Metropolis!

Michael