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Ooh!! This just keeps getting better and better! Lois better come up with and answer and soon!
Hi Crazy_Babe!
I'm glad you enjoyed this part. Yes, I hope you like the twists and turns in this one. Trying to stay on a schedule as much as possible with this one. More to come soon.
Okay the connection between Mayson and Dan is undeniable. I hope something happens between them and not them team up against our couple.
Just as Lois says she is ready, Mayson is in danger of course. Of course Clark to the rescue.
A connection between Dan and Mayson?
A plan to team up agains LnC?
That's it you've been hanging out with Vicki too long.
Of course there had to be a good cliffhanger to keep everyone wanting more at the end. Lois is ready and Mayson needs rescuing. <sigh>
Nice touch to link Daniel to Mayson. Makes us all assume that their original targets - Lois and Clark, respectively - are now safe from their interference.
Hope so, anyway. And I hope Mayson isn't injured too badly. Surely you wouldn't whack both members of our new favorite couple just to put a huge speed bump in front of our actual favorite couple. Would you?
Loved Lois blurting out "I can't cook" as if Clark were privy to her innermost thoughts and discussing the subject with her. Same with the question of children. And his puzzlement at her kangaroo logic reminds me of myself at similar moments. Even super-guys don't understand women, so I don't feel so bad now.
Hi Terry!
I'm glad you're enjoying this little fic. I'm sure Clark has found himself just as confused as you when he's been subjected to the jumping around of topics as Lois rambles on about something he SHOULD know in her babble-mode logic.
I think it's safe to say even Superman needs some help so you shouldn't feel too bad.
All these assumptions and only three chapters in.
You've got seven more chapters. I'll leave it at this. There will be a lot of twists and turns you won't see coming and some you may. Enjoy!
Loved part 3. Their conversation, insecurities and reassurances were adorable.
She’s ready? Lois is ready and Superman is needed?
For some reason I don’t feel super bad for Mayson or Dan.
Hey Jackie!
Yeah, how dare Mayson and Dan need help when Lois and Clark are having an important conversation, right?
Glad you liked this part. More to come.