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Posted By: CarrieRene FDK: Get It Right 1/1 - 02/18/18 12:11 AM
Feedback for Get It Right goes here... my response to the Kerth Challenge #6.

It’s Lois and Clark’s wedding day and someone close to them has a lot of thoughts on the subject.

Thank you.
Posted By: cuidadora Re: FDK: Get It Right 1/1 - 02/18/18 05:55 PM
Nice take on his thoughts. Very much in character. Not identifying him more so I don't spoil the surprise. laugh

Posted By: jackiek Re: FDK: Get It Right 1/1 - 02/19/18 02:50 AM
Well done! I really enjoyed it.
Posted By: PuffyTiger Re: FDK: Get It Right 1/1 - 02/19/18 05:27 AM
This was really good. It makes me think about how others see us and how counter to reality it can be. Thanks for sharing!
Posted By: Lynn S. M. Re: FDK: Get It Right 1/1 - 02/19/18 08:12 AM
Poor fellow.

An insightful piece.

Joy,
Lynn
Posted By: CarrieRene Re: FDK: Get It Right 1/1 - 02/20/18 02:23 PM
Originally Posted by cuidadora
Nice take on his thoughts. Very much in character. Not identifying him more so I don't spoil the surprise. laugh

Thank you. Sometimes I think Jimmy had such bad-luck in the love department because Clark didn't.
Posted By: CarrieRene Re: FDK: Get It Right 1/1 - 02/21/18 10:53 PM
Originally Posted by jackiek
Well done! I really enjoyed it.


Thank you, jackiek. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Originally Posted by PuffyTiger
This was really good. It makes me think about how others see us and how counter to reality it can be. Thanks for sharing!


Thank you, PuffyTiger. Its nice when we realize how others may see us or how others may see things differently even when reading a story.

Originally Posted by Lynn S. M.
Poor fellow.

An insightful piece.

Joy,
Lynn


Thank you, Lynn. Yes, no one realized how he always had the short end of the stick when it came to love.
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Get It Right 1/1 - 01/06/19 04:39 PM
Hi CarrieRene!

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They couldn’t stand one another.

Then one day they didn’t fight as loudly.
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I don’t know if there’s any $scrooge McDuck fans out there, but still
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To this day Clark Kent is the only person to be partnered with Lois Lane and not request a transfer.
Well, he’s also the last person to be partnered with her.

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He never had the trouble with women I did.
Well…
LOIS: *squints*

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They either cheat on me, try to kill me,
I think Clark also ticks all those boxes.

You most definitely got it right!

wave Michael
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