Hi,

Great piece.

Very nice, Raquel .

- Alicia

That's all I have to say. Well-written and sad.

Jen

Heartbreaking, but lovely.

Raquel

This is beautifully written.

Tricia

Hi Raquel!

Congratulations!

Your story is lovely.

See you soon

Your friend,

Anna.

Raquel, what a beautifully written piece!!

What a wonderful, poignant glimpse of Lois's introspection!! (plus a big ole' WAFFY ending)


S (who is sorry if you had to get your dictionary out to decifer this feedback )

Awww, a sad story, but with a happy ending.

I love the last paragraph.

Thanks for posting it!

Kathy

Lovely poetry, Raquel.

The reunion is the perfect end for the pain.


Thanks,
claire

Beautifully done, Raquel, and touching. The last paragraph is perfect as an ending point. Brava!

LabRat

Racquel,
lovely story
very touching
merry