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Posted By: CarrieRene FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 - 09/23/17 08:41 PM
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Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 - 09/27/17 06:49 PM
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Broken machinery.

Rotten roofs.

Dead crops.

There was so much his parents hadn’t told him. Missing Lois seemed to be the least of his worries right now.

Oh my, the Kent farm has indeed fallen on hard times! He really does need the help and reassurances of his girlfriend. Its during a crisis such as this when a relationship is truly tested. That's when you know the person will remain forever by your side or will fade away at the first sign of trouble.

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She walked toward the tractor and grimaced when she saw a handprint welded into the side. He only did that when he was angry or frustrated. The entire time she’d known him, she’d only seen him lose control a handful of times. Each time there had been special circumstances. Though the current situation was extenuating as well, this time there was no bad guy to stop. No super-villain to put behind bars. You couldn’t take a heart attack and put it in prison for hurting those you cared about. You couldn’t arrest it.

I to agree with Lois on this one. Super powers cannot fight against that!

Wow! I have been reading Lois and Clark fanfic for six years, this is the first time in my reading history these two have faced off in physical combat. Yikes!!!

Posted By: CarrieRene Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 - 09/30/17 12:31 AM
You mean Lana and Lois? Oh yeah, no one messes with the Kent's and gets away with it in Lois' eyes. They don't deserve Lana meddling in their affairs or saying Jonathan deserved what he got. Lois is furious with this woman standing in Clark's bedroom.
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 - 09/30/17 09:32 PM
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You mean Lana and Lois? Oh yeah, no one messes with the Kent's and gets away with it in Lois' eyes. They don't deserve Lana meddling in their affairs or saying Jonathan deserved what he got. Lois is furious with this woman standing in Clark's bedroom.

Yes. I did mean a serious fight between Lana and Lois, normally it is a war of words. Not actually fighting! shock I really should have finished the comment, but was in a hurry to post.

So happy to see Lois and Clark at least in the same state and house!
Posted By: folc4evernaday Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 - 10/01/17 01:24 AM
That cow deserves a name! She baptized Lana in manure where she belonged. Poor Clark! Hopefully, those two can get on the same page.
Posted By: jackiek Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 - 10/21/17 06:18 PM
Glad Lois didn’t let Clark keep her away and went to Smallville anyways. Lol at Lana getting what she deserved. The nerve of that woman! I’m glad Lois didn’t believe a word she said. Wow! A physical fight between them? I really hope Clark sees what’s really going on here.
Posted By: CarrieRene Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 - 10/21/17 11:50 PM
Thank you, Val and JackieM. Yes, Bessie the Cow will make another appearance shortly. Yes, let's hope Clark sees what is really going on with Lana. I am going to try and start working on the new chapter soon (two other fics I am working on (finishing up Into The Fire and a new story coming soon).
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