FDK: State's Evidence - 9/14 - 05/04/17 03:42 AM
More action in this one. Let me know if you like Clark as a car thief.
Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 9/14 - 05/04/17 09:51 AM
Incredible story. I'm just beginning to read it. Wow
Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 9/14 - 05/04/17 04:57 PM
Oh, I love this part. Especially this line “Help desk Indian or attack-the-wagon-train Indian?”
Great story. Keep it coming.
r/
Artemis
Great story. Keep it coming.
r/
Artemis
Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 9/14 - 05/04/17 05:14 PM
Well, Clark's gotta do what he's gotta do to keep Lois safe. 
Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 9/14 - 05/10/17 10:29 PM
Hey, y'all, glad you're still reading and commenting. Here are my responses.
L, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Hope you like the rest of it, too.
Artemis, glad you liked Clark's question. Billy's not too bright, so that's the most concise way I could think of to get Clark's question in. I'm also glad it didn't come across as offensive in any way.
Dandello, you're right, Clark needs to protect Lois. It's not only his job, it's part of his very nature.
Next chapter coming up - same Super-time, same Super-station.
L, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Hope you like the rest of it, too.
Artemis, glad you liked Clark's question. Billy's not too bright, so that's the most concise way I could think of to get Clark's question in. I'm also glad it didn't come across as offensive in any way.
Dandello, you're right, Clark needs to protect Lois. It's not only his job, it's part of his very nature.
Next chapter coming up - same Super-time, same Super-station.
Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 9/14 - 05/12/17 02:51 AM
Okay, must provide at least some feedback before allowing myself to read the next part. :-)
I really enjoyed this one, with the subtle hints at superpowers (and this very keen Lois noticing that they are, if not odd, then at least noteworthy in their impressiveness), and the more active role in evading their pursuers (theft! kidnapping! misdirection!) rather than just trying to avoid them.
I really enjoyed this one, with the subtle hints at superpowers (and this very keen Lois noticing that they are, if not odd, then at least noteworthy in their impressiveness), and the more active role in evading their pursuers (theft! kidnapping! misdirection!) rather than just trying to avoid them.