FDK: State's Evidence - 4/14 - 04/04/17 06:03 PM
Not much action here, but we do get some important peeks into the minds of many of the principals. I'd say things are starting to heat up.
Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 4/14 - 04/04/17 07:41 PM
Terry,
Just another great segment.
Self image. Lois feeling like permanently damaged goods because she was married to Luther.
Bittersweet. If "Clark" had been around when Alex was courting her.
Hope. She's attracted. He's attracted. In any universe, they are destined to fall in love again and again.
Just another great segment.
Self image. Lois feeling like permanently damaged goods because she was married to Luther.
Bittersweet. If "Clark" had been around when Alex was courting her.
Hope. She's attracted. He's attracted. In any universe, they are destined to fall in love again and again.
Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 4/14 - 04/05/17 06:33 PM
Terry,
just to let you know that I'm still hooked on your story, but I don't have the leisure right now to leave some FDK...
just to let you know that I'm still hooked on your story, but I don't have the leisure right now to leave some FDK...
Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 4/14 - 04/06/17 06:38 AM
Great little bits of self-deprecating humor in Lois' thoughts in this section. It makes me sympathize with her character and believe that she's trying to recover some of herself that she suppressed during her marriage to Luthor. I'm enjoying the UST between these two during their road trip together. 
Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 4/14 - 04/06/17 09:04 PM
Terry,reading you're stories is always soooo enjoyable. RL leaves little time lately but I needed to at least let you know that I'm reading and really enjoying.
It had been a while since a new story made me want to read slowly, without rushing through it or skimming. Feels like every word needs to be read and I think that being able to find that balance as a writer is a remarkable ability :-).
Please keep it coming!
It had been a while since a new story made me want to read slowly, without rushing through it or skimming. Feels like every word needs to be read and I think that being able to find that balance as a writer is a remarkable ability :-).
Please keep it coming!
Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 4/14 - 04/11/17 01:04 AM
My apologies for not responding before now. I had a bad weekend with my knee and a rough PT session today. When it comes to physical therapy after any kind of injury or surgical repair, some days you're the windshield and some days you're the bug.
SupesFan, you're right about Lois and her self-image. Hard to blame her, though - she's been the next thing to a slave for half a decade, and it's not easy to escape either the mindset or the physical captivity. I think she's doing well, but of course the path of recovery is often strewn with thorns and hidden roots to trip the weary traveler.
Thanks for reading, Millefeuilles! I hope you keep enjoying it.
Thanks for the kudos, Groobie. UST? I put that in? Oh, yeah, I did. I don't usually tangle up Clark and Lois with personal attraction so early in my stories, but it seemed appropriate for this narrative.
Cristina, your praise is ego-inflating. You keep saying stuff like that and I might starting thinking that I'm actually a passable wordsmith.
Next chapter up in moments!
SupesFan, you're right about Lois and her self-image. Hard to blame her, though - she's been the next thing to a slave for half a decade, and it's not easy to escape either the mindset or the physical captivity. I think she's doing well, but of course the path of recovery is often strewn with thorns and hidden roots to trip the weary traveler.
Thanks for reading, Millefeuilles! I hope you keep enjoying it.
Thanks for the kudos, Groobie. UST? I put that in? Oh, yeah, I did. I don't usually tangle up Clark and Lois with personal attraction so early in my stories, but it seemed appropriate for this narrative.
Cristina, your praise is ego-inflating.
You keep saying stuff like that and I might starting thinking that I'm actually a passable wordsmith.Next chapter up in moments!