Showdown! Everything comes together in this action packed chapter! Plus we see a couple of mysterious 'visitors' finally take center stage to save Clark's secret.

I have to thank Ken Janney for the action sequence, his extensive medical and ordnance knowledge made everything shine!

Delightful!

Gosh, I hope all of that drama doesn't affect attendance for the Age of Napoleon exhibit! Great action, and nice shout outs to some minor characters from the show (Calvin is a low-life in every universe!) I very much hope that Clark takes the first chance they have alone to tell Lois the truth, because if he continues to hide the secret after all of that drama, she will be rightly angry when she eventually finds out.

Framework4


The entire part made you smile? Glad to know!

Groobie


Hmmm, considering none of the exhibits were damaged when Tempus was shooting up the place it's highly doubtful.


The action writing is all Ken's writing, that is an area I am seriously lacking in! I totally agree with you, Calvin is a real jerk in any universe, but at least he stayed at his janitorial job at the museum for awhile. But he was still a creep. I made Elise a lot more assertive in that she left him before making the mistake of marrying the louse.


Clark will try, but his timing could not be worse! Next part will be up this week and then the grand finale!

Wow! What an action packed showdown chapter.

Glad to see Tempus didn't succeed completely in his plan. He did expose Daae and Arianna's plotting, so that part was successful Hopefully everyone with survive their wounds relatively unscathed. Or maybe their brush with their own mortality turns Daae and Luthor into good guys... Or not!

Would be nice if Jack's pictures include photographic proof that Superman and Clark are two separate people. That would help him keep his secret identity both currently and in the future after CJ and Wanda return to their universe.

Have Clark's superpowers already returned? Sounds like his enhanced vision was working pretty fast. I always wondered if Clark would be affected differently by kryptonite from another universe.


Apparently no matter what the universe, poor Clark just can't get a break in his timing!

Looking forward to the next installments!

Tempus really messed up with the kryptonite - did he simply not get close enough, or was there some other factor making the stuff less effective?

Ciudadoro


Daae and Luthor learn a lesson and appreciate their mortality? Highly unlikely!


A LOT of reporters and society folk saw Clark and Superman (CJ) standing side by side before and after the arrest of Tempus. The pictures Jack shot will solidly confirm that they are two very different people. Yay Jack!

Marcus


Nope. That was me playing with canon! Hope you like H.G's explanation in Part thirty-one.