FDK- Unmasked 6/? - 12/23/16 05:37 AM
Feedback folder.
Merry Christmas.
Merry Christmas.
Re: FDK- Unmasked 6/? - 12/24/16 03:49 AM
Well done. Looking forward to where you take this, hopefully Clark will write a scathing anti-Superman article pointing out the hero's failure.
And hopefully he will find something that Luthor's people have overlooked that will tie him to the crime.
It would be nice to see Luthor defeated by a powerless Clark Kent.
And hopefully he will find something that Luthor's people have overlooked that will tie him to the crime.
It would be nice to see Luthor defeated by a powerless Clark Kent.
Re: FDK- Unmasked 6/? - 12/28/16 01:59 AM
Just getting caught up and saw this part had been posted. Poor Clark! Even after everything he's been through he still can't convince Lois that Luthor = TROUBLE.....and WHAT SHIPMENT??? Over here biting my nails waiting to see where you take this one. 
Hope you had a Merry Christmas. Can't wait for Part 7.
Hope you had a Merry Christmas. Can't wait for Part 7.
Re: FDK- Unmasked 6/? - 01/09/17 02:53 PM
I am really enjoying your story so far! Sorry that I did not leave any feedback sooner! I'm resolving to try and do better this year and let my appretiation for all you wonderful writers out there be known. Can't wait for part 7 to be posted !
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Re: FDK- Unmasked 6/? - 01/09/17 08:45 PM
Pssst.... We're over here biting our nails here... You can't leave it like this 
Re: FDK- Unmasked 6/? - 01/10/17 12:55 AM
Yay, feedback! Thank you to all of you for taking the time to comment
Part 7 is coming, I promise. I've been a bit slack, fanfic-wise, over the holidays.
Part 7 is coming, I promise. I've been a bit slack, fanfic-wise, over the holidays.
Re: FDK- Unmasked 6/? - 01/10/17 02:00 AM
Originally Posted by NostalgiaKick
Yay, feedback! Thank you to all of you for taking the time to comment
Part 7 is coming, I promise. I've been a bit slack, fanfic-wise, over the holidays.
Part 7 is coming, I promise. I've been a bit slack, fanfic-wise, over the holidays.
I feel your pain NostalgiaKick! Its hard to remember where you left off after the long holidays... Can't wait for part 7
Re: FDK- Unmasked 6/? - 01/10/17 07:06 PM
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“The leak has had a bigger impact than we anticipated.”
Lex Luthor laid the evening edition of the Daily Planet down and looked over at Nigel.
“Not only was the crane’s operator overcome by the fumes, but the resulting destruction was more significant than we’d foreseen. And now, OSHA has announced an investigation into yesterday’s… unfortunate accident.”
“As you predicted, sir.”
Lex fixed his underling with a stare. “There was nothing that could provide a link to us?”
Lex Luthor laid the evening edition of the Daily Planet down and looked over at Nigel.
“Not only was the crane’s operator overcome by the fumes, but the resulting destruction was more significant than we’d foreseen. And now, OSHA has announced an investigation into yesterday’s… unfortunate accident.”
“As you predicted, sir.”
Lex fixed his underling with a stare. “There was nothing that could provide a link to us?”
There is something so sinister about a man who has caused so much death and destruction, yet treats it as part of doing business. Your Lex is truly a monster. Well written.
Re: FDK- Unmasked 6/? - 02/08/17 05:02 PM
Just read this and really enjoyed it. Hope the muse keeps it coming g. Thanks so much for sharing!