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I'm almost at the end of the chapters I had completed, so my posting schedule may slow down a little.

Yikes! Things are certainly getting dark for the Kent family. I'm glad the Kents have Wayne Irig to rely on. I only hope Luthor doesn't try to reach them through him... again. Luthor definitely has forethought. This whole revealing all his cards to Superman was a trick to get Superman to reveal his identity and Clark fell for it! Oh, no! And Luthor has schemes planned for Lois. I only hope Clark will be able to turn Lois to his side to help him defeat Luthor, only how? Without his folks and Lois dating his #1 enemy, poor Clark is now alone in the world.

Double yikes! (I know that feeling.) I look forward to your next part, whenever it may arrive.

Yup, he's completely isolated. No support networks, just him and a devious and ruthless enemy.

Thanks, Virginia! I shouldn't fall too far behind (though no promises over Christmas).

This story is quite a bit darker than anything else I've ever attempted- something I probably should have warned about when I first started posting.

Hmmm, not nearly as dark as some I have read. Clark no longer has his old support network, which mean he's going to need to build another and quickly. Surely during the time he's been in Metropolis as Clark he's learned about the skills of come of his CI's? In any case, keep writing, I'm very much interested in seeing where you go with this story.

Really enjoying this game of cat and mouse between Luthor and Clark. Can't wait till the next part.

I don't doubt that! Even on the gfic side there's some pretty dark themes. However, this is about to get quite a bit darker.

Next part will be up as soon as I finish rewriting a section.

Ack! Yes, Clark will be concerned for Martha and Jonathan, but Lex Luthor destroying Superman's reputation will be almost as heartbreaking as him losing his parents.

Oh, this is clever. Fortunately, Martha and Jonathan may be able to get away safely. Unfortunately, it confirms that Clark is Superman and takes his support away. Fortunately, Unfortunately, Luthor anticipated a move and probably has someone watching the house.

Ah!

Yeah, it seemed sensible to me to set up some way of warning Martha and Jonathan... especially as Clark lives his life literally surrounded by investigative reporters.