That was simply a sweet story. This was a new reaction to the big revelation for Lois. And the proposal...from her! Well, that is still going to take some getting used to. Anyway, simply fabulous!

Susan, lovely resolution! Good to see Lois deciding what she wants and going all out to get it.

Great job for your first story! Now, send this one off to the Archive and get working on your next!


Wendy

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

For someone who can not sleep - its 5:30 in London UK - a wonderful way to keep a buzzing mind active.

Please, please may we have some more.

SNL

PS - what about an epilogue to the epilogue?

Happy writing,

SNL

Susan

A great ending! I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to your next story.

Tricia

Sheer bliss.

c

Absolutely adored this!!

Okay, so you know you have to write another story now, right??

Irene

Oh, I enjoyed it a lot. The epilogue was lovely - and as for the package from the Cheese of the Month Club... Great! Kudos!

Waiting for your next story,
AnnaBtG.

Sweet ending! Congrats on your first story! More soon please because you are a great writer especially with those descriptions!

~Lois Lane Wanna Be

I love this!! So sweet! I like that she knew the truth and let him come and tell her... but not before being honest, FINALLY, herself!


Love the way you put this - nice!!

A great ending to a great story~


~NICOLE

Aw that was adorable. Loved the Cheese of the month club ending. Laura

Brava!

gerry

Thanks for posting these together <g>

There was a lot to like in this. Again, great phrasing:

and


I love how the ending parallels the beginning.

The two-word note at the end was just perfect.

So... when are you writing the next one?

PJ
p.s., it's "past" not "passed"

Hi.

Congratulations!

What can I say? That was wonderful. Loved the ending!

Caryn

what? its over??? how come? how come? i didnt even get started/// ARGH! i demand a sequel!

MDL.

Hi,

Loved it, and so nice to see Lois react more positively.

Yours Jenni

Fab!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Perfect. Absolutely perfect.

And the best sentence?

Love of matrimonial proportions.

Sheer genius.

Yvonne

frigging the best piece of writing i've read on here. if this doesn't win an award, someone needs to be fired. are you professional?

a lot of the writing on here is too fast paced, all talk and not enough thought in people's heads, not enough description. this was excellently balanced, with imaginative, original descriptions and word combinations. and something I've never been able to do---A GOOD TITLE! someone else used the excuse of "cheese of the month" and it made me laugh, and here's a story with that as the title! very well done overall.

Sileas - I'm nowhere close to a professional writer! I've never done any creative writing before. Thank you for your enthusiastic response to my story.

I really must thank everyone for your kind words. I am truly honored and humbled by your overwhelming support.

Susan

My apologies for not leaving feedback before this. I often wait until a story is finished these days before reading it.

This would have been remarkable even if it weren't a first story, and I really enjoyed it. I always wondered why, in the series, Lois didn't follow Clark to see where he went when he gave one of his lame excuses and ran away. It took the events in "And the Answer Is" to push her into it, which really wasn't in Lois's character. I'd think she should have gotten curious a lot sooner. I especially liked the ending, too. Instead of dithering around about the whole thing, she made up her mind and went after him.

I hope we'll be seeing more from you in the not too distant future. New writers are always welcome around here.

Nan