FDK: I Knew The Truth 15+16/20 - 06/03/16 02:50 PM
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Re: FDK: I Knew The Truth 15+16/20 - 06/06/16 02:51 AM
So glad you posted!
Martha and Clark are determined to get his costume ready so he can finally become the hero he was supposed to be!
More comments later.
Martha and Clark are determined to get his costume ready so he can finally become the hero he was supposed to be!
More comments later.
Re: FDK: I Knew The Truth 15+16/20 - 06/07/16 04:59 AM
I was looking forward to reading these next two parts all afternoon/evening 
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I am really enjoying having Lois be involved with everything 'Superman'. It's such a different take--from normally having Lois clueless about all of Clark pre-revelation, to having her literally help to create the hero. It was interesting seeing her be so secure with her plan, to really, once being immersed into Clark's childhood home, having a lot of doubt. Knowing Clark and his family more each day, she's now starting to realize the full impact of what they are trying to do.
I'm very curious how all of this will go over with Luthor. What will his reaction be? Nervously waiting to find out.
Great job!
Laura
. I am really enjoying having Lois be involved with everything 'Superman'. It's such a different take--from normally having Lois clueless about all of Clark pre-revelation, to having her literally help to create the hero. It was interesting seeing her be so secure with her plan, to really, once being immersed into Clark's childhood home, having a lot of doubt. Knowing Clark and his family more each day, she's now starting to realize the full impact of what they are trying to do.
I'm very curious how all of this will go over with Luthor. What will his reaction be? Nervously waiting to find out
. Great job!
Laura
Re: FDK: I Knew The Truth 15+16/20 - 06/07/16 12:47 PM
It's always a pleasure reading your feedback.
Lois also helped alt-Clark develop Superman. But then, the hero already existed in her reality. I think most of the fics I have read that had Lois clued in so early on, were stories where Clark was exposed. I wanted to do it differently.
Originally Posted by LMA
I am really enjoying having Lois be involved with everything 'Superman'. It's such a different take--from normally having Lois clueless about all of Clark pre-revelation, to having her literally help to create the hero.
Lois also helped alt-Clark develop Superman. But then, the hero already existed in her reality. I think most of the fics I have read that had Lois clued in so early on, were stories where Clark was exposed. I wanted to do it differently.
Re: FDK: I Knew The Truth 15+16/20 - 06/07/16 01:01 PM
Originally Posted by bakasi
It's always a pleasure reading your feedback.
Lois also helped alt-Clark develop Superman. But then, the hero already existed in her reality. I think most of the fics I have read that had Lois clued in so early on, were stories where Clark was exposed. I wanted to do it differently.
Originally Posted by LMA
I am really enjoying having Lois be involved with everything 'Superman'. It's such a different take--from normally having Lois clueless about all of Clark pre-revelation, to having her literally help to create the hero.
Lois also helped alt-Clark develop Superman. But then, the hero already existed in her reality. I think most of the fics I have read that had Lois clued in so early on, were stories where Clark was exposed. I wanted to do it differently.
I am enjoying the story also for the same reason. I am really a fan of Nan Smith. In several of her story arcs Lois discovers C=S fairly early on, frequently during Nightfall but once when he stops the tsunami during the pilot , and then helps him trap Luthor. I am always a Lois AND Clark kind of a reader and really don't care much for the Lois VS Clark stuff. Your story is a breath of fresh air to me.
Thanks
Mike