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Posted By: Lieta FDK: Celebrate by Lieta - 05/19/16 12:24 AM
Another in the powers series, but not focusing as much on the power itself (telescopic vision). I'm still debating whether or not to post chapter 2 of Eternal as well, but we'll see.
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: Celebrate by Lieta - 05/20/16 11:58 AM
I am a little confused. What are Clark and Jonathan celebrating?
Posted By: Lieta Re: FDK: Celebrate by Lieta - 05/20/16 03:31 PM
I wrote this one a bit quick, heh. But the idea was almost every other of these turned into a negative or stifling experience. I wanted one where either Jonathon or Martha didn't do that.... But, this was not my original plan for this one so maybe I should go add a bit more there.
Posted By: LMA Re: FDK: Celebrate by Lieta - 05/25/16 03:51 PM
It's nice to see Clark's power put to random day-to-day use. See him help his dad when they are doing something so normal and fun that Clark loves smile.

And I enjoyed how Clark seemed to be coming into his own here, figuring out how to be himself, and be happy.

Laura
Posted By: Lieta Re: FDK: Celebrate by Lieta - 05/26/16 05:31 AM
Thanks, I have to admit I rushed on this one, it still may get reworked a bit, expand on the scene talking with Jonathon especially.
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Celebrate by Lieta - 12/24/18 11:27 AM
And here we go again!

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The birds shone with brighter colors and so did some of the plants. Even the sunlight all around him seemed brighter. He didn't mind his glasses, but he loved being able to see normally.
laugh

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He'd even started to be able to control what he saw without the glasses. So far he'd managed to turn off the colors his parents couldn't see and he could make some other colors fade a bit.
Next trick, keep other people clothed. Will be a very important skill in later years.

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"Clark?" his father asked, "What are you looking at?"

Clark frowned at him for a moment, then pointed to the sky. "That hawk just caught a pigeon."
Oops?

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"Can you tell me if anyone's using the dock across the lake?" Jonathon asked curiously.
Hmm…he might have a great career as the Hubble telescope ahead of himself.

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"Son, you're doing what's normal to you. Even if you have to pretend at school sometimes, I want you to remember to find joy in what can do, not be afraid of it."
Plus, being fast and seen in water, too, is good for catching fish.

wave Michael
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