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Posted By: LMA FDK--This Is Not How I Am [1/2?] - 05/09/16 03:17 AM
(Figured I'd just go ahead and start a feedback thread...)

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This was lovely clap...

I haven't watched LW in such a long time, so it's a nice revisit to that episode for me.

My favorite parts were where exactly Clark chose to get away from everyone. The details of what his out of wack powers created (because of the locale's) were great...the crater of a hole in the sand--which got all over Clark in the desert...then also the little deserted island that he happened to sneeze at, creating so much trouble at the bigger neighboring islands.

I was with Clark--figuring he couldn't go wrong with the island idea. Little did I know... wink.

Looking forward to more smile
Laura
Posted By: bakasi Re: FDK--This Is Not How I Am [1/2?] - 05/09/16 08:30 AM
Welcome back, LaraMoon!

I love your take on this episode. Poor Clark. There really is not a single place in the world for him to be, is there?
I'm eagerly waiting for the conclusion.
Posted By: Ultra Woman Re: FDK--This Is Not How I Am [1/2?] - 05/09/16 12:54 PM
So glad to see you back, Lara! smile1

Oh, and poor Supes! mecry Hope Lois finds the cure fast! grovel

Just a reminder: the blue arrow makes it easier to find the stories. wink

Andreia
Posted By: Lynn S. M. Re: FDK--This Is Not How I Am [1/2?] - 05/09/16 05:58 PM
Poor Clark! (And poor island residents.)

And if Perry hadn't known The Secret before, he certainly does now.

Looking forward to part 2.

Joy,
Lynn
Posted By: MetroChumpy Re: FDK--This Is Not How I Am [1/2?] - 05/09/16 06:06 PM
Yaaaay! It's posted! It's so great to see this idea come to life, especially in the hands of one of my very favorite authors. It's so nice to see you handling these two again. Especially bringing some delicious angst to their lives. You know I'm a sadist like that. wink

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He'd hiccuped, he explained, and it might have been funny, she thought, if her heart hadn't been breaking for him.

I love this line, it's perfectly evocative of the feelings these two are going through.

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"Hearing cries for help when I'm not supposed to do anything about them; when I can't do anything about them… Lois, it's killing me."

Poor Clark frown

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What was left inside his costume, he'd just have to deal with later.

Isn't a spandex suit full of sand enough punishment for whatever damage he's caused? Because that sounds awful.

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"And Clark went along to make sure Superman doesn't accidentally destroy the one thing that might cure him?" Perry asked, a frown forming on his face.

How helpful of Perry! It's almost as if he knows how good of friends Clark and Superman are wink

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Drenched, beaten and helpless, Superman witnessed the destruction he'd so innocently caused. A deserted island had been a poor choice after all.

This breaks my heart for Clark. He at very least deserved an island getaway for all of this.

So my heart is offically hurting for both of them. You did a great job at that! I so can't wait to read the rest. <3
Posted By: LaraMoon Re: FDK--This Is Not How I Am [1/2?] - 05/10/16 02:05 AM
Thank you so much for the comments, I'm glad you're enjoying this! <3
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK--This Is Not How I Am [1/2?] - 05/10/16 07:51 PM
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"Lois?" Perry cut in, looking at her curiously, "Lois… are you alright?"

"Oh, uh… I'm just worried about him, I guess."

"Superman?"

Lois blinked. "Well, yeah," she said, forcing a casual shrug, "aren't you?"

"They'll be fine, Lois. I'm sure they'll both be just fine."

"Yes… Anyway, it'll all be over soon. Clark would have explained all this himself, but they were in a bit of a hurry to leave and get to this cure. You understand, don't you?"

"Of course."

Don't tell me Perry doesn't know!

Now the question is; how long will Clark have to wait until the effects of Red K wear off?
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