Wonderfully done! I'm in the apparent minority who actually liked the fourth season, but I have always loved these two episodes and have rarely found any fanfiction about them, so when I realized where this was set, I got very excited!
I really love how Lois's overriding concerns, in betweent he fears for her own future and reputation and self-loathing (which are all very valid!), are all about Clark. It was heartbreaking when she thought on how he didn't deserve to only fight for her and see her between glass, or to watch her die (as if he could!), but the real kick-to-the-gut was when she wondered if he'd still be as devoted to truth and justice if they stole the woman he loved from him! That was incredibly thought-provoking, and inspires all kinds of dark thoughts about alternate worlds with cynical, world-weary Supermen!
I could really feel the stress and despair of Lois here -- very emotional!
Hi, AntiK!
I liked some of the fourth season. Eps like Soulmates and the Tempus eps were fun. And, of course, the second half of the NK arc - absolute favorites! Not to mention that L&C finally tied the knot, even if the Touched By An Angel flair was weird.
Anyway, I'm glad you liked the story! It was a lot harder than I'd imagined, getting into Lois' mindset. I really thought it would be a fast write, but it took days of hard thought about where her thoughts would go, without just repeating how hopeless and trapped she was feeling.
It finally clicked once I realized that, as much as it was about her, it was about Clark too.
I like the way you think. It *would* be interesting to explore a world in which Lois *did* die as a result of the justice system failing her. How would Clark react? I don't think he'd cease being Superman, but I can't imagine him playing well with the justice system anymore. (Not saying he'd kill criminals, but maybe being slightly more of a vigilante, like Batman.) Especially if that Clark's parents were both dead - I could see him "killing" Clark and becoming Superman full time. (No reason left for him to *be* Clark.)
Thanks for stopping in!