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Shocking revelations for both of them. First, that Lois loved/loves *him*!. Then, the whole Superman thing. Lots to think about for them both. Seeing as how there's only two more parts, I can see this will be resolved pretty quickly. Hopefully with a good outcome for our favorite couple. I liked Clark's reaction to Lois saying she loves him. I can picture the goofy smitten grin on his face. It was good of him to not keep her in the dark anymore. After all, she was the one to track him down. Sarah

Well, that was a twist I wasn't expecting!

Lois wouldn't be the reporter she is if she wasn't persistent and gave up after one rejection. Yea for the strong woman willing to throw it in a man's face what a total jerky lunkheaded jerk he's acting like being! Go Lois!

Only Clark would leave town without saying 'goodbye' because he read the signals wrong. He has nobody to blame for feeling horrible for a year than himself.

I wasn't expecting him to go from groaning that she showed up on his doorstep again to telling her about Superman all within one part. He was right though, if they're going to be honest, he needed to step to the plate first.

So does she reject him again and chase Dan to DC?

What-A-Chapter!

I loved the momentum...

Lois, coming back, demanding answers (and it wasn't even done with an excuse about needing her clothing she left at his place ). Clark, after the knee-jerk of leaving Metropolis last year, telling her immediately that he's Superman when he senses 'they' are moving forward (way to go, Clark !). Lois, letting it slip out, that she loves him ( ! ! ). KISSING . And the cliff-hanger that will have me on edge till you post again .



Great paragraph . I love that after a year of overthinking, Clark ACTS! Doesn't think. Doesn't plan. Follows his heart .

Awesome job!!!
Laura

Oh man, the angst factor just tripled!

The rapid fire conversation between these two very complex people was very interesting and real! So glad Clark decided to come clean as the Man in the Spandex Suit. His did not have a proper reason for withholding the truth from Lois, especially if he wanted to have an honest relationship with her.

There are only two chapters left! How are you going to resolve matters with our heroes?

It's the middle of the night here and I'm up with a child that refuses to go back to sleep, so forgive me if I'm a little rambly or incoherent...

Yup, that's pretty much the picture I had in my head when I wrote that bit too


Okay, I'll admit that I enjoy torturing characters (though I usually fix it in the end), but that's just evil! What an intriguing idea...

Funny thing is, it wasn't until everyone picked up on that detail in the last chapter that I even *thought* about using the clothes as an excuse for Lois to come back.
It's moments like that that make me yell things like "It's about time!" at my TV screen. Pretty sure I yelled that exact phrase at the TV when I first saw UltraWoman...


Thank you They're fun characters to write, and I think the show's writers did a good job of creating characters with a lot of depth and complexity (even if I occasionally complain that some episodes leave something to be desired- but then, that's what fanfic is for ). It's something I find sadly lacking in a lot of TV shows- little to no character development.

I just realised that I'm about to post the second last chapter and I haven't finished writing the last one! I need to get my tail in gear... It's almost done, I promise