fdk: Just Visiting (8/?) - 01/03/16 02:18 AM
It's not much, but I hope y'all like. 
Re: fdk: Just Visiting (8/?) - 01/03/16 03:04 AM
Batman? Interesting turn of events. Will the Bat help get them home to their own dimension?
Re: fdk: Just Visiting (8/?) - 01/03/16 07:15 AM
A-ha! The woman was an agent of Batman's (perhaps even Wonder Woman)! Thank goodness! Phew. I'm glad to know that Clark is a decent man in all dimensions.
Re: fdk: Just Visiting (8/?) - 01/03/16 09:56 AM
New part! 
Lois wanted to prove her not-son right in that she can cook?
Oh.
So, what exactly are they up to?
Wink-wink squeak-squeak? So they fit better in?
Hmm…H.G.Wells? 
On the other hand, dark hair could indicate that he and the other dark haired person are related. Husband? Father?
Ah. Oh. I see? Should have known. After all, it’s a Queenie! Did he bat-bug their house and car?
Also, he *did* bat-bug them! This is comedic gold! So, Diana Prince and Bruce Wayne. Only not a couple, just evil? Okay, wicked.
Maybe they rent. And they *are* married?
His shirt?
Ah, I see. He got baned.
And yes, please, we shall discuss this. Now—as you said. Please? Any time now? It’s been almost 7 hours since you last updated this story. In words—seven hours. SEVEN!
Michael
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The remains of an only slightly charred dinner remained on the table
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courtesy of Lane's rapidly improving control over his powers.
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"We've still got EPRAD and Wayne Tech left," Clark reported.
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She hesitated for a moment. "I was just thinking," she said, "that maybe, if we do have to stay for a while, perhaps we could--"
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"Mr. Kent, I presume?" A dark haired man stood on the doorstep, leaning on what appeared to be a gold-topped cane. He looked straight at Clark, his eyes narrow.
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"I'd like to have a few words with you," the man said, "about your illicit affair with my wife."
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"Bruce!" a voice called, and Clark looked up to see the woman from earlier coming up the path.
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She reached the doorway to stand beside him and shot him a glare. "Don't mess with him like that; it isn't funny! Didn't you hear how upset he was?"
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"Yes, dear," the man said, stepping into the house as if he owned it. His wife followed close behind.
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He tapped Clark's chest with the head of his cane, and Clark heard the whine of acoustic feedback. A close inspection of his shirt revealed a tiny listening device. He gaped at their two visitors.
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"I take my godson's safety very seriously," the man said pointedly.
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He limped to the sofa and made himself comfortable. "Shall we discuss that now?"
And yes, please, we shall discuss this. Now—as you said. Please? Any time now? It’s been almost 7 hours since you last updated this story. In words—seven hours. SEVEN!
Michael
Re: fdk: Just Visiting (8/?) - 01/05/16 08:33 PM
Batman! 
. Did not see that coming! I like the plot twists . But...it leaves me wanting to read more (hint, hint, hint).
Laura
. Did not see that coming! I like the plot twists . But...it leaves me wanting to read more (hint, hint, hint).Laura