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A www! What a fun, sweet story! See, something did come from Miranda's perfume. Love the final line, it pulled everything together.

I love it! Such a Lois Lane leap of intuition; I dreamed it, and then you said it, so it must be true. She's right that that's flimsy evidence, but by that point he'd already confessed. Someone needs to buy Clark a poker face for Christmas. I also loved how his tie morphed into the Suit in her dream. Thanks for playing, and for sharing!

Thank you! This was my first (completed) challenge fic and I had a lot of fun with it.
I laughed so hard at that and it's so true! His poker face is terrible.

Sweet story. The Clark in the comics does a better job of hoodwinking Lois whenever she accuses him of being Superman than most of the Clark Kents in the stories on the boards. As a big fan of the dream motif revealing the truth, I cannot help but adore this story and Lois's subsequent jump in logic.

Terrific idea. Maybe even for another story.

Awesome--I really enjoyed his story !

And what a great idea...using the line in Lois' dream to connect to Clark's whistling song. Then, like was mentioned, closing the story by using the line again. Such a great full-circle piece.

Oh--and have to agree--Clark's tie morphing into Superman colors was a very great visual. Fantastic!

Great job!
Laura

Delightful, great fun.

Freaking adorable!! And I loved how the song lyric was woven in throughout the story. Lois and Clark both seemed very much in character. Great job!