Awwwwww....Beautiful.
Like Virginia, I'm leaving FDK after reading through this section twice.
How you write, what you write, the feelings that you are able to convey with your words--it absolutely wow's me...time and time again.
I've hoped--all along--for a happy ending. Knew somehow (but no idea 'how' at times
) things could be put back together. That Clark could find himself. That Lois could grow, become more from all these mistakes. That because, deep down--beyond the pain, confusion, and the hurt--there was love.
And you gave us that--a true happy ending. Despite...everything that has happened. It's made all the sweeter b/c of the journey.
And, like Lynn stated, the happy ending was believable. Both Lois and Clark--both of them--have changed so much. Grown into themselves. Taken responsibility for their lives. There was hurt and betrayal, and so much pain, over the last few months but you showed us the light. How they slowly could heal. They got to this part in the journey--Chapter 24--by going through everything, every pain, in Chapters 1-23.
Clark choosing Lois--choosing to acknowledge everything she has given him, not taken away, gave me chills. That he recognizes this--that together they have the world in front of them--gives them every opportunity in life.
Can not wait to read Chapter 25...
Laura (who is hoping Lois is busy, moving on over back to the DP as we speak
).