It's all over except for tying up the ribbons on the package. That will come with the epilogue.



"Life is pain, Princess. Anyone who says different is selling something."

I was just about ready to go insane thinking that was the end! Come on! That would be an incredibly cruel cliffhanger! The story is clearly NOT done! Exciting, action-packed part. But I neeeeeeeeeeeed the resolution. There are more than a few loose ends left over. On pins and needles waiting to see if the ribbons are curled to perfection or hopelessly frayed.

Very well done, at this point I am sorry for Mayson that she had to kill someone, I expect Lois to die, but well written and I am very impressed with this whole tale.

The epilogue has been posted, and I anticipate no new surprises or twists. I'm certain that many of you are now relieved that this tale has come to an ending. I plan to wait for a board moderator or someone at the archive to let me know if I can post it there before I submit it for inclusion.

Thanks to the brave few who left feedback. I know this wasn't everyone's cup of tea.

Special thanks to Bakasi for her help with the German translations. Computers are great tools, but they only go so far.

I promise that my next story won't be anything like this one. See y'all soon!