Hi,

Cute start. I'm a diabetic this excess of sugar is not good for my health.

I hate this perfect and sweet Lana.

Is there a Lois somewhere?

More ASAP, please.

MAF

I like the idea that Lana wasn't always a female canine so please continue. I think it's sweet.

Ooh, interesting start. More please? more! I'd very much like more...

I really like this story. It’s nice to have Lana supporting and helping Clark, and It’s great for a young Clark to have a friend and girlfriend he can talk to. I can’t wait for the next part .