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Posted By: Lynn S. M. FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 08/06/15 10:15 AM
This is the second of the ficlets I wrote for last year's fundraiser.

As always, all comments welcomed.

Joy,
Lynn
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 08/06/15 02:53 PM
That's awesome! I never thought about it that way - suddenly seeing your exact duplicate in the paper - and as a new superhero, no less! Excellent ficlet!
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 08/07/15 12:40 PM
Barry had to come from somewhere! Thank for the chuckle!
Posted By: groobie Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 08/07/15 04:01 PM
Funny story! Oh, my dear, sweet Barry. And yet, ever since I wrote my story about him, I can't see him as just a random look-alike anymore. laugh lol

Groobie, who is wondering idly where Barry met Melody...was she a mom at the kids' parties, or a woman at the adult parties? devil
Posted By: Lynn S. M. Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 08/07/15 10:09 PM
Thanks for leaving feedback.

DC and Morgana, I've always thought that Barry has been seriously underutilized in fanfic. Although I have seen him show up from time to time in stories, there seems to be so much potential for more for him.

Susan, your Barry story was phenomenal; I'm glad I wrote mine before reading yours, or I probably wouldn't have had the courage to venture into a Barry story of my own.

Joy,
Lynn
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 08/07/15 10:47 PM
Lynn - you may have inspired me...
Posted By: Lynn S. M. Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 08/07/15 11:34 PM
DC, way cool! I'll keep an eye out. If your story is relatively short (now that my school year is beginning again next week, I won't have a lot of time for fun reading), I will definitely give it a try.

Joy,
Lynn
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 08/08/15 12:12 AM
First I need to write it, but the idea is there..
Posted By: LMA Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 08/10/15 03:48 PM
Great job, Lynn clap notworthy hyper

As I've said to you other times, I just absolutely love your take on words--how you make the stories really sound like the characters by the way that they speak. It adds so much detail, and I enjoy looking for those creative examples that you throw in smile.

And Barry...so much so love Barry dance.

This is wonderful, Lynn!
Laura

Oh--and Susan, you had me rotflol in your FDK about the possibilities of where Barry could have met Melody. You never know grin...
Posted By: Lynn S. M. Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 08/11/15 06:42 PM
Hi Laura,

Thank you. You've made my day! I must admit to having a bit of fun with eye dialects. ("Take *that*, elementary school spelling teacher!" wink )

Joy,
Lynn
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 12/28/15 01:27 PM
Hi Lynn!

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Melody looked up from her paper long enough to call out to her boyfriend. “Hey, Barry, get in here! Ya gotta see this guy in the Daily Planet.”
Hmm… Barry Allen? No, right. Barry the Double.

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“Trust me. This guy you really hafta see.”
At first I thought she had seen a photo of Clark, but no…

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He was about to ask if the circus was in town when he saw the fellow’s face -- his own face!
Oops? How’s he going to explain that? But hey, at least it wasn’t one of Superman getting cozy with a certain female reporter. Melody might not have taken kindly to that.

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“That’s not you. His name is Superman. Get this: He ate a bomb and then flew the Prometheus into space. *He* flew it -- no plane, no jetpack, no nuthin’. Just him.”
And now she’s wondering why she got the B-model.

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“It’s not April. And they wouldn’t do that even then; they only print the truth.”
PERRY: And only when we can prove it!
LOIS: razz

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Think I’ll check out one of them -- what-do-ya-call-ems? -- doubles agencies. Could be big money here. Thanks for calling me in, babe. I owe ya one.”
/points at ML Thompson’s Superstud/ Things didn’t end well there, if I remember correctly…

Cute origin story! I wonder if he already had the figure or if he first had to get rid of a beer belly and get a good shave…

wave Michael
Posted By: Lynn S. M. Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 12/28/15 01:58 PM
Hi Michael,

Thanks for leaving so much feedback. Looks like you are having a serious readathon now.

Joy,
Lynn
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Rising Star (1/1) - 12/28/15 03:18 PM
Yeah...some people call it Christmas holiday...

wave Michael
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