Vic,
One wonders just how much of this is personal experience from your delivery of the twins?
Very compelling!
Ha! The C-section (and needing to up the meds halfway through - I could feel tugging but not pain, per se) for breech babies and the sudden onset of pre-e was from my experience. (And the immediate vomiting of water from the meds - not fun!)
But my girls were delivered at 38 weeks and didn't need any NICU time - they stayed in the room with us the whole time. The 35 weeks and NICU time came from a close friend of mine, who's daughter was a 35 weeker and who spent about 4 or 5 days in the NICU, just until she could hold her body temp steady.
Also, I kind of loved the idea of making Lois and Clark both sort of out of control of the situation. One of the early images I had when writing was of Clark standing there, torn as to if he should follow the baby or if he should stay with Lois. I has initially toyed with the idea of a regular (early) labor and natural delivery for Lois, but then have her start bleeding heavily, but even my twisted muse agreed that was a bit harsh.
Glad you enjoyed it!