I was halfway expecting it, but I still yelled when I saw the name "Tempus." I hadn't thought about how Lori would react, though, so that was a little bit of comfort. She's such a nice thing most of the time, you can forget how ferocious she can be when she has to.

More, I tell you, I want more!

PJ

Ohh! I love time traveling!
I don't know if I understand, but I think that, because of the fight, the destination originally designed by Tempus is not this one, is it? So Lory can be everywhere and everywhen! But probably it's not the eighteenth or nineteenth century, and it's not Europe or Asia; what about late twentieth century and Midwest or Est Coast of U.S.? Are you looking for a Lori-Lois meeting? This could be the only way for Clark to falling in love with two different women at the same time!
I'm really really looking forwards your next post, Nan!!!

simona

Great part

...More soon please

Janine

Is Tempus stupid enough to have two incarnations of LL together so they can kick his *** twice?

Hurry Nan!!

Jose

And so this is a more straight forward story line...

Looking forward to more...

James

Holy Moly! Go Lori!!

I'd LOVE to see Lois and Lori meet, that'd be pretty cool!

~Liz

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. I'm going to LAFF this weekend so Part 4 may be my last post until next week. I'll try to get another one up before I leave, but if not, I'll do my best to have part 5 up as soon as possible next week.

Nan