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Well, that turned out much more melancholy than I intended it to. The first draft was more upbeat, but I think I like this better.

Feli

I liked this a lot .

What I enjoyed about it was the sense of longing. Of Lois really wanting to be with Clark, but knowing it wouldn't be fair to both of them. The confusion of that...loving (she thinks) two different people at the same time. But then really, how it's not confusing at all because it all just comes down to loving the same one man completely.

The 'love triange between two people'--you completely captured the feel of it .

GREAT job!
Laura

No, you hit the right tones. Loving one man who is leading two very different lives would be confusing to those outside of the secret.

Well done. Your introspective Lois is delightful.