FDK- Terrified 1/1 - 06/08/15 03:25 AM
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Re: FDK- Terrified 1/1 - 06/08/15 03:35 PM
Wonderful job 
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The last two sentences:
...were really powerful. Well done
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I've always really liked ASU. I like the plot--the sense of doom. But mostly, I really love watching Clark--completely clueless to his past, but still--fall for Lois. How he's drawn to her. Knows her (in some way) even though he has no memory. He sense her, falls all over again for her. It's such a romantic concept.
And...Lois really does feel it, too. Her 'I mean I love you...like a brother'. Yeah, right
. It's a great moment.
How scary it would be to be Clark in this episode. So much responsibility, so much of everything relying on him. But not remembering a thing. You really captured that.
Awesome job!
Laura
. The last two sentences:
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Because right now, the world needs Superman.
And all they've got is the shell of Clark Kent.
And all they've got is the shell of Clark Kent.
...were really powerful. Well done
. I've always really liked ASU. I like the plot--the sense of doom. But mostly, I really love watching Clark--completely clueless to his past, but still--fall for Lois. How he's drawn to her. Knows her (in some way) even though he has no memory. He sense her, falls all over again for her. It's such a romantic concept.
And...Lois really does feel it, too. Her 'I mean I love you...like a brother'. Yeah, right
. It's a great moment. How scary it would be to be Clark in this episode. So much responsibility, so much of everything relying on him. But not remembering a thing. You really captured that.
Awesome job!
Laura
Re: FDK- Terrified 1/1 - 06/10/15 05:57 PM
Morgana writes:
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Clark's isolation is frightening. With a few chosen words the man's situation Appears on all levels to be hopeless. After all, how does one build on a past relation without the proper memories to sustain them?
ASU is one of my favorite LnC episodes, in a few succinct words the plight of one very important, yet scared young man comes to light.
ASU is one of my favorite LnC episodes, in a few succinct words the plight of one very important, yet scared young man comes to light.