FDK: Seed of Doubt (20/30) - 06/06/15 06:11 AM
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Re: FDK: Seed of Doubt (20/30) - 06/06/15 07:07 AM
Good showdown with Corbin. I believe Henderson secretly knows/suspects Clark's secret, so I like when stories have him quietly protect it without outwardly acknowledging it. I certainly understand Lois' point about wanting to spend time with Clark, just like any other normal couple, but I, personally, wouldn't mind some super takeout. 
Waiting for part 21...
Waiting for part 21...
Re: FDK: Seed of Doubt (20/30) - 06/07/15 01:29 AM
Originally Posted by groobie
Good showdown with Corbin. I believe Henderson secretly knows/suspects Clark's secret, so I like when stories have him quietly protect it without outwardly acknowledging it. I certainly understand Lois' point about wanting to spend time with Clark, just like any other normal couple, but I, personally, wouldn't mind some super takeout. Waiting for part 21...
Waiting for part 21...Interesting that you think that about Henderson. I hadn't really planned on him knowing or not knowing. I do, however, believe Perry (in this story) suspects, if not knows for sure.
Thanks for continuing to read...
Re: FDK: Seed of Doubt (20/30) - 06/08/15 05:19 PM
Trying to catch up today 
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Awesome part, DC. Great fight scene--so much more detail than on the show. I really love how you've brought Corben into the story, developed him and the whole story of Metallo. I've very much enjoyed it
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The moments between Lois and Clark were wonderful. I love the comfort and support they recieve from each other. And how Clark can finally completely be himself. It's really heartwarming to see them together.
Love the story--a big fan. Can't wait till the next installment
Laura
...Awesome part, DC. Great fight scene--so much more detail than on the show. I really love how you've brought Corben into the story, developed him and the whole story of Metallo. I've very much enjoyed it
.The moments between Lois and Clark were wonderful. I love the comfort and support they recieve from each other. And how Clark can finally completely be himself. It's really heartwarming to see them together.
Love the story--a big fan. Can't wait till the next installment
Laura
Re: FDK: Seed of Doubt (20/30) - 06/09/15 03:45 AM
Originally Posted by LMA
Trying to catch up today ...
Awesome part, DC. Great fight scene--so much more detail than on the show. I really love how you've brought Corben into the story, developed him and the whole story of Metallo. I've very much enjoyed it.
The moments between Lois and Clark were wonderful. I love the comfort and support they recieve from each other. And how Clark can finally completely be himself. It's really heartwarming to see them together.
Love the story--a big fan. Can't wait till the next installment
Laura
...Awesome part, DC. Great fight scene--so much more detail than on the show. I really love how you've brought Corben into the story, developed him and the whole story of Metallo. I've very much enjoyed it
.The moments between Lois and Clark were wonderful. I love the comfort and support they recieve from each other. And how Clark can finally completely be himself. It's really heartwarming to see them together.
Love the story--a big fan. Can't wait till the next installment
Laura
Thank you! Glad to hear that you are still enjoying the story. I rather liked getting to write in a fight scene or two with Metallo.