hey chris. i like the plot. don't know if it's you, your BRs, or both, but it definitely looks good to me.
i like dr saxon.
this lead looks like it could go to bigger things, too. i believe bribing a federal official is a major offense...
also like lois's fishing metaphor.
nice work.
also, thanks for reminding me... there's a toxic waste dump near my house that i've been meaning to look up. got a blood test coming up on thursday. we're hoping to track down the source of some of my health problems. your story reminded me to look into the site, and when i checked the EPA listings for my county, i got
68 hits. so now we have a few more things we can check for...
anyway, looking forward to part 14.
Paul