FDK: Seed of Doubt (8/30) - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Finally! The long awaited date!

Also, Happy Easter/Passover, FoLCs! And if you aren't celebrating either one, happy weekend!

What a beautiful date. I absolutely loved it. And the goodnight kiss... *sigh*

Can't wait for more

Originally Posted by KatherineKent

What a beautiful date. I absolutely loved it. And the goodnight kiss... *sigh*

Can't wait for more

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it - the date was a lot of fun for me to write.

Awwww! What a beautifully WAFFy part, DC. I read it, and immediately afterwards had to read it again

. So sweet, so romantic. And also, so very true to character. I'm really enjoying all of your moments as you bring Lois and Clark closer in this story.

The dialog was really wonderful, too--you had such a great blend of friendship, comfort, teasing, and feelings escilating.

The perfect chapter to start the weekend with

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Excited to see how they spend their day tomorrow.

Happy Easter to you, too! Awesome job

Laura

That was beautiful ... much better than their first date in canon.

Originally Posted by LMA

Awwww! What a beautifully WAFFy part, DC. I read it, and immediately afterwards had to read it again

. So sweet, so romantic. And also, so very true to character. I'm really enjoying all of your moments as you bring Lois and Clark closer in this story.

The dialog was really wonderful, too--you had such a great blend of friendship, comfort, teasing, and feelings escilating.

The perfect chapter to start the weekend with

.

Excited to see how they spend their day tomorrow.

Happy Easter to you, too! Awesome job

Laura

Thanks, Laura! Wow, that's some high praise. I really did like writing the date, and I guess that spilled over into the final product. I think L&C are so perfect together precisely because of the blend that you mentioned.

Hope you don't mind a (small) jump in time - we don't see date #2 because we still have a lot of ground to cover with this story.

Originally Posted by Annie B.

That was beautiful ... much better than their first date in canon.

Thank you! It's much nicer when there are no slamming doors involved, isn't it?

So sweet! WAFF-central!

Loving, emotional, honest, with genuine feelings spelled out in their kisses. So romantic!

It's wonderful that they're not hiding from each other in your story...things could have gone so wrong after their pheromone-induced night, but by being open in their communication, they've been able to come closer together. That's really great.

Happy Holiday, to all of my fellow Pastafarians.

Happy Easter to you too, dear!

Originally Posted by groobie

Happy Holiday, to all of my fellow Pastafarians.

Thanks! I'm one of them... In pasta we trust!

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But the poor man looked lost. Clark looked at the badge with the man's name, which was pinned slightly askew on his black vest. It stated that the waiter's name was Angelo.

"Is it easier if I speak Italian?" Clark asked, hoping to be helpful.

Ha! You don't fool me... I'm positive that the guy was absolutely capable to take the order, but Clark had staged the thing so he was able to seduce Lois speaking the sexiest language in the world... Not that I blame him for that!

Thanks for the WAFF!

Originally Posted by groobie

So sweet! WAFF-central!

Loving, emotional, honest, with genuine feelings spelled out in their kisses. So romantic!

It's wonderful that they're not hiding from each other in your story...things could have gone so wrong after their pheromone-induced night, but by being open in their communication, they've been able to come closer together. That's really great.

Happy Holiday, to all of my fellow Pastafarians.

Thank you! Lois and Clark in dating-mode are just too cute - the genuine feelings, the awkwardness, the best friendness. Miranda's perfume really only accelerated the physical aspect of their relationship (and only the one time) - but, as you said, at least that night didn't wreck things.

Pasta, you say? Mmmmmmmmmmmmm!

Originally Posted by HiddenMoon

Happy Easter to you too, dear!

Originally Posted by groobie

Happy Holiday, to all of my fellow Pastafarians.

Thanks! I'm one of them... In pasta we trust!

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But the poor man looked lost. Clark looked at the badge with the man's name, which was pinned slightly askew on his black vest. It stated that the waiter's name was Angelo.

"Is it easier if I speak Italian?" Clark asked, hoping to be helpful.

Ha! You don't fool me... I'm positive that the guy was absolutely capable to take the order, but Clark had staged the thing so he was able to seduce Lois speaking the sexiest language in the world... Not that I blame him for that!

Thanks for the WAFF!

Glad you enjoyed it! WAFF is so much fun!