FDK: Arrival of Destiny (9/13) - 03/29/15 07:19 PM
Re: FDK: Arrival of Destiny (9/12) - 03/29/15 09:55 PM
Oh no. No. No no. Nooooo!!!
Clark think that there's another guy in her life! This is bad. Really bad. Horribly bad. Devastating even!
Clark think that there's another guy in her life! This is bad. Really bad. Horribly bad. Devastating even!
Re: FDK: Arrival of Destiny (9/12) - 03/29/15 10:32 PM
Ack! So close, yet so far away. How frustrating for both Lois and Clark (not to mention for your readers).
So in this story, Clark has found a different way to be jealous of himself.
Can't wait for next weekend.
Joy,
Lynn
So in this story, Clark has found a different way to be jealous of himself.
Can't wait for next weekend.
Joy,
Lynn
Re: FDK: Arrival of Destiny (9/13) - 03/30/15 04:52 PM
Loved it! I like that Lois is beginning to get her footing with the Clark situation as opposed to some of the earlier chapters when she just could not seem to get herself even close to together.
Can't wait to see how far you take this in this story since you indicated that this is part of the 'Destiny series' in one of your FDKs. You could either wrap it up quickly or extend it out for a number of stories and really mess with Lois' mind...
Mike
Can't wait to see how far you take this in this story since you indicated that this is part of the 'Destiny series' in one of your FDKs. You could either wrap it up quickly or extend it out for a number of stories and really mess with Lois' mind...
Mike
Re: FDK: Arrival of Destiny (9/13) - 03/30/15 09:03 PM
Good job girl! Things are definitely getting interesting 
*She winks compulsively*
Clark: "Lois, have you got something in your eye?"
Yay for Clarkie jealous of the Mystery Man! I wonder if this means that KK loves geometry and instead of the canonical triangle CK-Lois-Sm she will offer us a... Quadrilateral 
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"Exactly what do you expect me to do?" came Clark's sarcastic retort. "It's not as if there is a weak link in this chain." She heard the rattle as he held up his bound hands.
"Well," she paused. "There could be," she proposed, tentatively. "Why don't you just look?"
"Well," she paused. "There could be," she proposed, tentatively. "Why don't you just look?"
*She winks compulsively*
Clark: "Lois, have you got something in your eye?"
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"Him? Him who?" Lois asked confused.
"Him. The man you are in love with, the one you couldn't be with years ago, but now you can." Clark was looking down at his shoes and trying to effect a nonchalant attitude.
"Him. The man you are in love with, the one you couldn't be with years ago, but now you can." Clark was looking down at his shoes and trying to effect a nonchalant attitude.
Re: FDK: Arrival of Destiny (9/13) - 04/02/15 04:37 AM
Oooohhhh nooooo! More confusion 
. Now Clark thinks that Lois is 'in love' with someone--and has absolutely no clue that this guy is him. Eek! I am really wanting to get into these next few parts and see how this resolves itself (?).
Very much enjoyed this part:
Lois knowing so much of what Clark is going to become...Clark, knowing what he can do, but not how he's going to do it to help the world. Makes for some really entertaining exchanges.
--looking at calendar and willing it to be next weekend
--
Awesome job!
Laura
. Now Clark thinks that Lois is 'in love' with someone--and has absolutely no clue that this guy is him. Eek! I am really wanting to get into these next few parts and see how this resolves itself (?).Very much enjoyed this part:
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Lois watched out of the corner of her eyes as Dr. Baines and her muscular associate finally wandered out of sight.
"Okay, they're gone. Do something, Clark," she spoke quietly but decisively.
"Do … something …?" came the confused reply.
"You know," she shrugged and jiggled at her bonds.
"Exactly what do you expect me to do?" came Clark's sarcastic retort. "It's not as if there is a weak link in this chain." She heard the rattle as he held up his bound hands.
"Well," she paused. "There could be," she proposed, tentatively. "Why don't you just look?"
"All right," he sighed.
"Just … look quickly," she interjected some sternness into her tone. "Baines is going to be back any minute to kill us. I don't know why she hasn't done it already."
Trying not to sneak a peek over her shoulder, while Clark pretended to rattle away at the chains, her eyes wandered over to Jimmy, still unconscious on the floor.
"Okay, they're gone. Do something, Clark," she spoke quietly but decisively.
"Do … something …?" came the confused reply.
"You know," she shrugged and jiggled at her bonds.
"Exactly what do you expect me to do?" came Clark's sarcastic retort. "It's not as if there is a weak link in this chain." She heard the rattle as he held up his bound hands.
"Well," she paused. "There could be," she proposed, tentatively. "Why don't you just look?"
"All right," he sighed.
"Just … look quickly," she interjected some sternness into her tone. "Baines is going to be back any minute to kill us. I don't know why she hasn't done it already."
Trying not to sneak a peek over her shoulder, while Clark pretended to rattle away at the chains, her eyes wandered over to Jimmy, still unconscious on the floor.
Lois knowing so much of what Clark is going to become...Clark, knowing what he can do, but not how he's going to do it to help the world. Makes for some really entertaining exchanges
. --looking at calendar and willing it to be next weekend
--Awesome job!
Laura
Re: FDK: Arrival of Destiny (9/13) - 04/04/15 06:15 PM
Poor Clark. Too bad Lois didn’t think of another excuse for not giving in to Claude. How lucky for her that Clark is unlikely to change his feelings even though he think she’s in love with someone else. Not so lucky for Clark, though. I hope you don’t torment the poor man for too long. 
Re: FDK: Arrival of Destiny (9/13) - 04/05/15 04:58 PM
Ack! I hope that Lois doesn't drag out Clark's confusion about who she's in love with for too long. Clark's likely to back off and hide his feelings, and that just won't do! No, Lois should just step into the hallway, grab the front of his shirt, and pull him in for a kiss. 
Re: FDK: Arrival of Destiny (9/12) - 04/05/15 08:14 PM
Originally Posted by Christina
Oh no. No. No no. Nooooo!!!
Clark think that there's another guy in her life! This is bad. Really bad. Horribly bad. Devastating even!
Clark think that there's another guy in her life! This is bad. Really bad. Horribly bad. Devastating even!
Originally Posted by Lynn S. M.
Ack! So close, yet so far away. How frustrating for both Lois and Clark (not to mention for your readers).
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So in this story, Clark has found a different way to be jealous of himself.
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Can't wait for next weekend.
Joy,
Lynn
Joy,
Lynn
Originally Posted by Mike M
Loved it! I like that Lois is beginning to get her footing with the Clark situation as opposed to some of the earlier chapters when she just could not seem to get herself even close to together.
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Can't wait to see how far you take this in this story since you indicated that this is part of the 'Destiny series' in one of your FDKs. You could either wrap it up quickly or extend it out for a number of stories and really mess with Lois' mind...
Mike
Mike
Originally Posted by HiddenMoon
Good job girl! Things are definitely getting interesting
*She winks compulsively*
Clark: "Lois, have you got something in your eye?"
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"Exactly what do you expect me to do?" came Clark's sarcastic retort. "It's not as if there is a weak link in this chain." She heard the rattle as he held up his bound hands.
"Well," she paused. "There could be," she proposed, tentatively. "Why don't you just look?"
"Well," she paused. "There could be," she proposed, tentatively. "Why don't you just look?"
*She winks compulsively*
Clark: "Lois, have you got something in your eye?"
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"Him? Him who?" Lois asked confused.
"Him. The man you are in love with, the one you couldn't be with years ago, but now you can." Clark was looking down at his shoes and trying to effect a nonchalant attitude.
"Him. The man you are in love with, the one you couldn't be with years ago, but now you can." Clark was looking down at his shoes and trying to effect a nonchalant attitude.
Originally Posted by LMA
Oooohhhh nooooo! More confusion . Now Clark thinks that Lois is 'in love' with someone--and has absolutely no clue that this guy is him. Eek! I am really wanting to get into these next few parts and see how this resolves itself (?).
. Now Clark thinks that Lois is 'in love' with someone--and has absolutely no clue that this guy is him. Eek! I am really wanting to get into these next few parts and see how this resolves itself (?).Quote
Very much enjoyed this part:
Lois knowing so much of what Clark is going to become...Clark, knowing what he can do, but not how he's going to do it to help the world. Makes for some really entertaining exchanges.
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Lois watched out of the corner of her eyes as Dr. Baines and her muscular associate finally wandered out of sight.
"Okay, they're gone. Do something, Clark," she spoke quietly but decisively.
"Do … something …?" came the confused reply.
"You know," she shrugged and jiggled at her bonds.
"Exactly what do you expect me to do?" came Clark's sarcastic retort. "It's not as if there is a weak link in this chain." She heard the rattle as he held up his bound hands.
"Well," she paused. "There could be," she proposed, tentatively. "Why don't you just look?"
"All right," he sighed.
"Just … look quickly," she interjected some sternness into her tone. "Baines is going to be back any minute to kill us. I don't know why she hasn't done it already."
Trying not to sneak a peek over her shoulder, while Clark pretended to rattle away at the chains, her eyes wandered over to Jimmy, still unconscious on the floor.
"Okay, they're gone. Do something, Clark," she spoke quietly but decisively.
"Do … something …?" came the confused reply.
"You know," she shrugged and jiggled at her bonds.
"Exactly what do you expect me to do?" came Clark's sarcastic retort. "It's not as if there is a weak link in this chain." She heard the rattle as he held up his bound hands.
"Well," she paused. "There could be," she proposed, tentatively. "Why don't you just look?"
"All right," he sighed.
"Just … look quickly," she interjected some sternness into her tone. "Baines is going to be back any minute to kill us. I don't know why she hasn't done it already."
Trying not to sneak a peek over her shoulder, while Clark pretended to rattle away at the chains, her eyes wandered over to Jimmy, still unconscious on the floor.
Lois knowing so much of what Clark is going to become...Clark, knowing what he can do, but not how he's going to do it to help the world. Makes for some really entertaining exchanges
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--looking at calendar and willing it to be next weekend --
Awesome job!
Laura
--Awesome job!
Laura
Originally Posted by DebbieG
Poor Clark. Too bad Lois didn’t think of another excuse for not giving in to Claude. How lucky for her that Clark is unlikely to change his feelings even though he think she’s in love with someone else. Not so lucky for Clark, though. I hope you don’t torment the poor man for too long.
Originally Posted by groobie
Ack! I hope that Lois doesn't drag out Clark's confusion about who she's in love with for too long. Clark's likely to back off and hide his feelings, and that just won't do! No, Lois should just step into the hallway, grab the front of his shirt, and pull him in for a kiss.
You'll just have to see how this information affects everything...
Re: FDK: Arrival of Destiny (9/13) - 04/07/15 05:05 AM
Uh-oh! I'm late. I need to go read the next part now.