I can't wait to see who is the shadowy character

Jose

I read this last night but haven't had a chance to comment until now

Hmm... cultured female voice... I'd suspect Arianna Carlin, but we've already had Arianna in this series, and I don't know how she'd know about the half-kryptonian kids... I'm looking forward to meeting whoever it is.

Henderson totally rocks. Especially liked his brief reference to "gifted" children, and how Martha realized immediately what he meant. And wouldn't it get complicated for everyone to remember who knows which parts of the truth?

I have the funny feeling that the kids' new telepathic abilities will come in handy, sooner or later I'm also always suspicious of "false labor" in fiction, but we'll see.

Write more, post more!

PJ

I was vastly amused by the noise pollution that poor snoopy guy had to listen to!

The interaction between Martha and Henderson was great too

Do you think the kids, not just Marta, can talk to Wyatt cause they're half human/half kryptonian?(cept CJ,right?)? Or is it that Clark never really tried so didn't know he could?

Loving your writing as always Nan! Never stop.

Hi

Great part Nan!!!

Keep the good work

Next part ASAP

Karla

Love this section and am looking forwerd to more.
James

Nan

Another excellent part! Please post more soon.

Tricia

I just wanted to mention I'm following this story and am really enjoying it so far Please keep posting!

Hi,

Great part!

I was just re-reading the entire Dagger series and, as I was finishing Heritage(Aug 2001) and starting Unforeseen Consequences(Oct 2001) I realized something, you've had Lois pregnant with triplets for nearly 4 years!

It's about time these babies get born !

James, who loves this series and all your others.

Lol, James. What with the various series I'm handling, it's amazing it's only been four!

Anyway, as you may have noticed my warning to Tank, we're going to bring this to an end soon now.

Nan

PS: I'm babysitting all this week, which is why not much is getting written, but I'm doing my best to write when I have spare time. It's going to take a little longer with this story because there's a lot going on this summer for us, including the replacement of the roof and the remodeling of both the bathrooms, but it will progress -- just a little more slowly than usual.