FDK: Beneath the Surface (13/14) - 09/21/14 07:10 AM
Crawling out from my hole to post. Comments? Was Dr. Leeks room as you expected?
Crawling out from my hole to post. Comments? Was Dr. Leeks room as you expected?
Re: FDK: Beneath the Surface (13/14) - 09/21/14 08:12 AM
Wow. What an all round fantastic chapter. I was completely distressed, along with Clark, about the clones. But then they kissed ... and then progressed through the night to an 'almost' revelation, then cuddling in bed, and Clark really letting slip how he felt when they woke, and then ended in a real revelation and a really hot kiss.
Fantastic.
Fantastic.
Re: FDK: Beneath the Surface (13/14) - 09/21/14 02:52 PM
I'm glad to see this story being updated again. This was a great chapter, especially Clark's reaction to the clones and the fact that Lois found out that he's Superman.
Re: FDK: Beneath the Surface (13/14) - 09/21/14 10:21 PM
So glad to see this story again! Great surprise on a Sunday. No need to hide behind a barrier, I was positively glad to read this entry.
It is not often that the Man of Steel has his life so utterly turned upside down. This is all of Jonathan and Martha's worst nightmare for their son come to realization. Dissection indeed. Now the haunting question comes into play; what to do about the clones?
Excellent reveal. Its not often that Clark gets to tell Lois himself that he is Superman and oh, what a heartbreaking way for him to do it.
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Shall await the final installment on this wonderful story at your pleasure.
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Clark shook off her hand. “I need to get out,” he said in a panic. “I can’t...this has to stop.”
It is not often that the Man of Steel has his life so utterly turned upside down. This is all of Jonathan and Martha's worst nightmare for their son come to realization. Dissection indeed. Now the haunting question comes into play; what to do about the clones?
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Clark stopped pacing and went back to the window. “Telepathy, I guess. The clones each sent me their life story, nothing but torture and pain streaming into my head all at once. Each pleading with me to end it, but I can’t, Lois. I can’t kill them, they’re a part of me,” Clark turned back to look at her, pain written all over his face. He stared at her, as if frozen; his only movement was to slowly reach up and remove his glasses. “Superman can’t kill anyone.”
Excellent reveal. Its not often that Clark gets to tell Lois himself that he is Superman and oh, what a heartbreaking way for him to do it.
.Shall await the final installment on this wonderful story at your pleasure.
Re: FDK: Beneath the Surface (13/14) - 09/22/14 02:53 AM
Wow - a lot sure happened in this chapter. It's got to be Lex behind the cloning. How did he get a Superman tissue sample?
Re: FDK: Beneath the Surface (13/14) - 09/23/14 02:28 AM
Very affecting chapter. The clone room was horrifying, and that came through clearly. You captured Clark’s emotional state perfectly. Lois’s response was great too — understanding instead of getting angry.
I’m looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up!
I’m looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up!