FDK: All Shook Up - Matchmaker Style 3/10 - 09/16/14 02:36 PM
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Re: FDK: All Shook Up - Matchmaker Style 3/10 - 09/17/14 01:37 AM
Greetings Ken! 
Interesting save with the kiss. But won't anyone notice that Lois is without her partner and Superman just flew off?
Somehow, Lex in an apartment doesn't sound correct. How about penthouse?
Accurate Science!
Excellent touch getting the world's reaction to Superman's mission. Something that was missing from the original broadcast.
This is the memory of one reality. It is possible that H.G. might have tampered with things when LnC married years earlier than they should have. With each day that passes, Lois is living with two tracks of memories. What is and what might be ....
Ground control to Major Tom ... commencing countdown, engines on ...
Perry caught Lois? Please tell me Perry knows Clark is Superman ....
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Neither of them realized that the kiss had been televised. Fortunately, their faces were not visible to the cameras so not even a lip reader could tell what was being said.
Interesting save with the kiss. But won't anyone notice that Lois is without her partner and Superman just flew off?
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In his apartment, Lex Luthor started chortling.
Somehow, Lex in an apartment doesn't sound correct. How about penthouse?
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“Mission control, I’m using orbital mechanics. Once I left the atmosphere I accelerated just enough to leave Earth’s gravity well. There is no need for me to continue to use my flight power at this point. I can conserve my energy and coast to the interception point. Once I have visual acquisition, I will then accelerate to maximum and drive in.”
Accurate Science!
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Suddenly the screen switched to a montage from around the world. The banner headlines of many papers in as many languages flashed across the screen and over that was heard JAPANESE, SPANISH, SHONA, and RUSSIAN in voice over. The only word common in all the broadcasts was "Superman."
Excellent touch getting the world's reaction to Superman's mission. Something that was missing from the original broadcast.
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Lois winced. Even though she knew what her memory contained, she was scared.
This is the memory of one reality. It is possible that H.G. might have tampered with things when LnC married years earlier than they should have. With each day that passes, Lois is living with two tracks of memories. What is and what might be ....
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“Ground control to Superman. Come in Superman.”
Ground control to Major Tom ... commencing countdown, engines on ...
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Fortunately, Perry White was standing next to her and when, as she finished speaking she started to collapse he caught her. With her hands covering her face she allowed Perry to escort her to his office.
Perry caught Lois? Please tell me Perry knows Clark is Superman ....
Re: FDK: All Shook Up - Matchmaker Style 3/10 - 09/18/14 09:07 PM
Hi Morgana,
Thanks for the FDK!
Won’t Clark be missed?
Yes, but we will see how it is handled.
Lex’s apartment.
Well, the penthouse is his office and his residence or apartment. I changed it to residence.
The memories are accurate, however, there is always a nagging doubt that it could be wishful thinking.
Perry caught Lois as she started to collapse. Knowing how close she and Clark are to Superman this is not unexpected.
Thanks for the FDK!
Won’t Clark be missed?
Yes, but we will see how it is handled.
Lex’s apartment.
Well, the penthouse is his office and his residence or apartment. I changed it to residence.
The memories are accurate, however, there is always a nagging doubt that it could be wishful thinking.
Perry caught Lois as she started to collapse. Knowing how close she and Clark are to Superman this is not unexpected.