FDK: Mother's Day...2 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Love that even Wyatt can hear Marta. Must be a soulmate kind of thing. These kids are going to make Pilson (or whoever he really is) sorry that he started up with CJ.

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Since the window was on the second floor of the building, and Lois Lane was pretty much grounded with her triplets, there was only one person it was likely to be,

I can see Henderson thinking that!

Hope you find time inbetween enjoying your new granddaughter to write some more.

gerry

Hey, if Wyatt can 'hear' Marta, Lois ought to be able to 'hear' Clark!

The next question is, can Marta/Clark hear Wyatt/Lois in response?

Loved the united front noise pollution strategy.

They are talkig top each other and it´s really great.

Next part ASAP

Karla

Oh, this is getting fun

Loved the noise pollution and the way the kids were taking casual glances through the wall at the guy in the car.

Oh, and have I mentioned that I love Henderson?

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Henderson took the paper. "If I were the curious sort, I'd wonder why your adopted son was developing your powers, but fortunately I'm not. Curious, that is.

Good thing he's not only uncurious, but also very trustworthy.

Nitpick patrol:

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"CJ overheard someone on the phone asking him if CJ was exhibiting any unusual abilities. He (CJ) x-rayed the guy's gym bag and saw a gun in it, and as of five minutes ago, his (Pilsons) car is parked across the street from my house, with a directional microphone aimed at it. My house phone is probably also bugged. I want to know who he works for."

There's a term for that, but basically, you need to straighten out which "he" is who. If you see what I mean

Want more, want more!

PJ

Nan

A great part!

Please post more soon.

Tricia

Y'know, the best thing about Nan stories is that the characters remember they have brains. And use them.

How nice to see the soulmate thingy in action, even at such a young age! I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.

Hazel

Jose

Pam wondered

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There's a term for that, but basically, you need to straighten out which "he" is who. If you see what I mean

It's called an ambiguous pronoun reference.

I knew all those years of teaching English would pay off some day

gerry

Already did.

Nan

Hey great part! It's always cool to see another story since it's part of one of my favorite series.

Looking forward to more!
Jen

I'm very happy to see a new chapter of the Dagger Series, I loved every step!

Which troubles our heroes (CJ, Marta, Linda and Wyatt) are getting themselves into this time?
Thank you for writing a new story, Nan!

simona

Great part!

I love your 'Dagger' series, Nan. The kids are wonderful. And this new story gives them yet another great adventure to cut their teeth on. They're going to be awesome crime fighters when they grow up.

Umm, and what's this I read in another thread? You don't like suspense? Aah, I see - you just like to keep us in suspense, right?

Well, you're doing a fine job, Nan! This one oozes suspense.

Hi,

Great part.

Just read 1 and 2.

Love it!

More ASAP, please.

MAF

It's still on my "to-do" list to start reading your Dagger series, Nan, but even so, I'm still enjoying this immensely!@

Love the soulmate thing with Wyatt/Marta.

Onaleia says,

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Hey, if Wyatt can 'hear' Marta, Lois ought to be able to 'hear' Clark! The next question is, can Marta/Clark hear Wyatt/Lois in response?

I would think so, because of the bond. And we had an example of that in the episode(name escapes me) where Mindy has infected Superman and he nearly dies.

Other than the Ouiji board thing(I realize that it is only being used as prop by CJ, I just have strong beliefs about them in general), great part.

James