FDK: Honeymoon in Metropolis – Matchmaker Style 6/10 - 08/22/14 03:38 PM
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Re: FDK: Honeymoon in Metropolis – Matchmaker Style 6/10 - 08/24/14 03:10 PM
For such a short part, there is a lot going here! 
Honeymoon bliss is fabulous! So much to learn and explore about each other. (Giggles) I love the romance!
Oh Clark, you are such a spoilsport!
Wake up Lois, Clark can't do everything! If cooking and cleaning are not appealing, how about taking out the garbage?
Luthor would have been creepy saying those words whether he was under the influence or not!
This really got to me. Lois sounded so lost and alone...
I always thought Roarke was more than a little insane.
Oh boy! The new Mrs. Kent has a lot to learn about communication and sharing the work duties.
As always the banter between Martha, Jonathan and Clark was spot on!
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When they finished, as they were cuddling in the afterglow, Lois said, "Let that be a lesson to you. From now on, put the ‘Do Not Disturb' sign out and we won't have to worry about the maid. This is the Honeymoon Suite after all. They would expect that on the doorknob. If it's not there they probably think we are out."
Honeymoon bliss is fabulous! So much to learn and explore about each other. (Giggles) I love the romance!
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Clark hesitated, "Uh, Lois, much as I'd like to, we are here on the Planet's dime. We do have a surveillance to conduct."
Oh Clark, you are such a spoilsport!
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Lois added, "Shared responsibilities. Actually, I think I made out in this deal. I mean, you do all of the cooking and cleaning." She lifted her hands and looked closely at them noting the smooth texture of her skin and added with a pleased sigh, "I'll never have dishpan hands." She added as an afterthought, “You know, Luthor complimented my hands.”
“There we go with Luthor again. This time you brought him up.”
“There we go with Luthor again. This time you brought him up.”
Wake up Lois, Clark can't do everything! If cooking and cleaning are not appealing, how about taking out the garbage?
Luthor would have been creepy saying those words whether he was under the influence or not!
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"Promise me that you'll never leave me alone again. Now that we're together, I … I couldn't bear to be without you again. I don't want to be alone any more. I was alone for … for so … so many years. I feel like I was lost during all that time and now … now you've found me and I don't want to be lost again. Promise me."
This really got to me. Lois sounded so lost and alone...
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After several minutes they saw Bart opening the shutters and they again could see into the office. They could see that Harrington was pale and they heard him say, "Roarke, you can't … millions of people!"
Roarke replied, "In for a penny, in for a pound," and he escorted Harrington out.
Roarke replied, "In for a penny, in for a pound," and he escorted Harrington out.
I always thought Roarke was more than a little insane.
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While his back was turned, she grabbed a hand held scanner and slipped it into her bag then said, "Clark, I'm going down to the lobby for a few minutes. I … need something from the drug store. You need anything?"
Absorbed in what was being printed, Clark replied, absently, "Okay. No, nothing for me. See you in a few."
"Okay, I'll see you in a few."
Absorbed in what was being printed, Clark replied, absently, "Okay. No, nothing for me. See you in a few."
"Okay, I'll see you in a few."
Oh boy! The new Mrs. Kent has a lot to learn about communication and sharing the work duties.
As always the banter between Martha, Jonathan and Clark was spot on!
Re: FDK: Honeymoon in Metropolis – Matchmaker Style 6/10 - 08/25/14 09:09 PM
Hi Morgana,
Thanks for the FDK!
Yes, they may be there on the Planet's dime, but it doesn't require 100 percent of the time on the job. They do have to pay attention to the assignment sometimes however.
Lois does her part, Clark just does more beacuse he can - superspeed comes in handy.
Yes, now that they are married, Lois can see where she was and where she was headed. She now can see just how lonely and lost she was when all she worried about was thet next award. She's changed a lot in just a few weeks. Of course the memories that Herb installed helped.
Just wait until the next chapter.
Thanks for the comment on the dialogue. I always strive to get the voices correct.
Thanks for the FDK!
Yes, they may be there on the Planet's dime, but it doesn't require 100 percent of the time on the job. They do have to pay attention to the assignment sometimes however.
Lois does her part, Clark just does more beacuse he can - superspeed comes in handy.
Yes, now that they are married, Lois can see where she was and where she was headed. She now can see just how lonely and lost she was when all she worried about was thet next award. She's changed a lot in just a few weeks. Of course the memories that Herb installed helped.
Just wait until the next chapter.
Thanks for the comment on the dialogue. I always strive to get the voices correct.