I was just going to say "enjoyed this little universe and move on, figuring there wasn't anything universe-shattering until the end.


If Wells knows anything about Clark's own backstory with regards to Krypton I can imagine him stopping with his foot half in the air with "Lara."

Wells: His PARENTS left Krypton with him instead of staying behind?? Who is this little girl? Lana or Lois or someone else altogether?

I'm guessing the little girl is Lois somehow. Don't know the specifics, though.

Cute twist! When you said the Kents had adopted a girl, at first I thought Kal-El was female in this universe, but I'm guessing he’s with his parents? You could write a whole story about how Jor-El, Lara, and Kal-El managed to create Earth identities for themselves and settle in Smallville. Perhaps the Kents helped them?

I wonder who the Kents’ little girl is too. No guesses here.

Lovely short. Nice exploration of a Jor-El trying to adapt to earth life.

Me? I think the Kents adopted a foundling child that arrived on their doorstep with the name of Zara pinned to her little blue blanket...

I'd love to see it continued, if you are so inclined.

B

Nice twist. Totally unexpected. Wells sure knows where to step out on the farm to hit the manure. So, did Clark come with the El's to Smallville? Whom did the Kents adopt? What will the El's think about Clark Kent (i.e. Kal-El) from another dimension marrying a human instead of Zara (if that's whom the Kents adopted)? I was wondering if perhaps in this dimension a whole group of farmers accidentally got zapped during lightning storm, making all of Smallville super powered.

Fun concept.

Very different! Bravo!

Thanks, guys!

I've been toying with an idea for a sequel, but I'm not sure when It'll actually get done. I'm glad you liked, though.

Ooooh! Another Queenie
Giant, flesheating flies?

ALT-World:



Huh. Got raised by the Irigs?

Not a reporter? Oh boy. Lois is not going to like that one bit. Then again, when the feds show up with an EPA warrant, Lois might get to meet the pig farmer.

Oh no! This Clark has had to contend with lack of oxygen when he traveled during his formative years

That’s not a Eureka crossover, is it?

/scratches head/ That would normally be a Lois. But Clark’s too old, so…

And he tried and tried with Lana to figure it out?
LANA (to the audience): Female birth control, just what the doctor prescribed.

He’s…he’s…and the little girl…she’s…she’s… I wonder what Herb will say when he meets little Kalvin El in the playpen.

Another fun setup, Mary!

Michael