FDK: Civil Disobedience- TOD (1/3?) - 07/01/14 09:10 AM
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Re: FDK: Civil Disobedience- TOD (1/3?) - 07/01/14 03:16 PM
Wow… scary! With all of Lois and Clark's descendants, I guess it shouldn't be a surprise there'd be someone who couldn't handle the power responsibly at some point down the line.
I'm interested to see where you go with this. And now I'm worried about Johanna.
I'm interested to see where you go with this. And now I'm worried about Johanna.
Re: FDK: Civil Disobedience- TOD (1/3?) - 07/02/14 02:06 AM
I'm wondering if "Jerome" is actually our hero Clark Kent who has gone bad over the years. I would hate to think that, but it would certainly make the story very interesting.
Re: FDK: Civil Disobedience- TOD (1/3?) - 07/02/14 05:14 PM
Thanks for your comments!
Debbie I agree with your statements. In fact, it was a bit difficult for me to pin down a time frame for all this to be happening, because I assumed it would be more likely that someone would go bad sooner, but I wanted it to (a) take place after Tempus' time and (b) not be the very first time something like this has happened, although of course this is on a larger scale. Also, your concern for Johanna is not unwarranted.
Iolanthe Wow! I really love that idea now! Clark slowly descending into this pessimist who tries to fix more and more things but instead just loses more and more control... Unfortunately, that's not the case here, but it's a great theory.
Stay tuned! I'll hopefully post the second chapter by the weekend, but I might go a bit slower than that because my bestie is getting married in a week and there's still a heck of a lot to do. :P
Debbie I agree with your statements. In fact, it was a bit difficult for me to pin down a time frame for all this to be happening, because I assumed it would be more likely that someone would go bad sooner, but I wanted it to (a) take place after Tempus' time and (b) not be the very first time something like this has happened, although of course this is on a larger scale. Also, your concern for Johanna is not unwarranted.
Iolanthe Wow! I really love that idea now! Clark slowly descending into this pessimist who tries to fix more and more things but instead just loses more and more control... Unfortunately, that's not the case here, but it's a great theory.
Stay tuned! I'll hopefully post the second chapter by the weekend, but I might go a bit slower than that because my bestie is getting married in a week and there's still a heck of a lot to do. :P
Re: FDK: Civil Disobedience- TOD (1/3?) - 07/03/14 11:58 AM
IolantheAlias:
When I saw your post I liked the idea although that would make Clark 500 years old (a record I believe in Fan Fiction, and thought Mouse could take us back to an bad ending for Lois (like Betrayal of Justice) that turned Clark against society and led him down this path. Normally I don't like those kind of stories but I guess I am just in the mood right now. I had not planned on reading this but am getting interested as it has a French Resistance kind of a feel to it. Once again Mouse has me reading something I never figured to get interested in...
Mike
When I saw your post I liked the idea although that would make Clark 500 years old (a record I believe in Fan Fiction, and thought Mouse could take us back to an bad ending for Lois (like Betrayal of Justice) that turned Clark against society and led him down this path. Normally I don't like those kind of stories but I guess I am just in the mood right now. I had not planned on reading this but am getting interested as it has a French Resistance kind of a feel to it. Once again Mouse has me reading something I never figured to get interested in...
Mike
Re: FDK: Civil Disobedience- TOD (1/3?) - 07/03/14 12:49 PM
Very cool!
Re: FDK: Civil Disobedience- TOD (1/3?) - 07/04/14 12:03 AM
Mike: Thanks! I'm glad you're getting into it. It's interesting you bring up the French Resistance-- a large part of my inspiration for this was "A Tale of Two Cities" and honestly it's one of my favorite periods of history. That's kind of the theme going through, so I'm glad you enjoy it.
L: Thanks! Glad to hear it!
That's kind of the theme going through, so I'm glad you enjoy it.L: Thanks! Glad to hear it!