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Posted By: Dandello FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 06/06/14 03:41 PM
Well? peep
Posted By: Mike M Re: FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 06/06/14 04:09 PM
She's BACK!!!

I was beginning to wonder and anxiously waiting the next chapter!

Thanks for posting. It was great!

I LOL at
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He gave her a long look. “Lois, I know you well enough to know you think your old editor here should be treated like a prize mushroom until you’re good and ready to tell him what you’re up to. So I want my assurances from him.” He turned to Kent. “What have you two got going?”
figuring that Clark would not give him as much of a run around as Lois.

I also loved the discussion at Uncle Mike's place and Clark running off to talk to Jonathan and Martha about what was happening. I assume/hope a visit to Smallville is in the not so distant future for Lois...

The Trask scenario is probably not surprising given Clark not being a Planet reporter when the Bureau 39 invasion of Smallville occurred. Sad to hear that Rachel and Wayne are gone but it gives the excuse to involve the FBI in the situation.

Nice to see the normal Henderson/Lois exchange also. A very nice chapter setting up a lot more action and potential romance but of course it depends on whether you send Lois back or she stays there. Either scenario would work given the situations you have set up.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Mike

Posted By: Framework4 Re: FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 06/06/14 08:23 PM
First off, delightful chapter, wonderful cliffhanger,
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Yeah, I've decided I don't know how long it's going to be.
YES!jumpSweet,

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I advise you make yourself scarce before the local agents come in here with guns blazing

Hopefully the local agents arrive after the MPD does, hopefully Clark was able to save Thompson. Perhaps he could have saved all of them but under the circumstances I hope he was only able to save Thompson.

That puts all remaining Bureau 39 assets in the hands of someone who owes his life to Clark Kent.

I am not worried about the ship or the globe, I doubt they can be damaged by a bomb that small. (Small, yes, well the city is still there, and even the local area is still there, so yes a small local bomb.)

In fact the bomb will help since all the paper records including the ones on Smallville will burn.

I hope that Clark was only exposed to some kryptonite dust in the bomb debris, leaving him and Thompson with some minor injuries.

I expect his powers will return before a final cleanup of the site can be made, so he should be able to recover the globe.

If not perhaps Martha has the globe in with his blanket.


Anyways, delightful part, looking forward to more.

Posted By: Dandello Re: FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 06/06/14 08:36 PM
Who's to say that Trask hadn't already left with Thompson and Lois didn't know it?
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 06/06/14 10:19 PM
Great story! Keep it coming!!! Love Lois' improved hearing.
cool
Artemis
Posted By: Mike M Re: FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 06/07/14 12:20 AM
Those super babies do have there benefit. Earlier she was noticing that the heat/cold were not bothering her also. Wonder how far Dandello will take this aspect of the story...

Mike
Posted By: DebbieG Re: FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 06/08/14 04:58 AM
Clark seems to be taking to having a partner in on the secret rather well. smile

It doesn't sound like Trask was planning to set off a bomb. What could have happened??

Looking forward to the next part!
Posted By: Dandello Re: FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 06/08/14 05:44 AM
Methinks Clark is still in shock about Lois knowing when nobody else has even guessed. party
Posted By: Framework4 Re: FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 07/02/14 07:22 AM
So is the muse hard at work or did she fly to Paris after watching Taylor Swift's Begin Again video?
Posted By: Dandello Re: FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 07/02/14 01:30 PM
Back in Tahiti I think... or lost in the backyard garden.
Posted By: Mike M Re: FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 11/16/14 08:26 PM
Has she returned yet? peep

Mike
Posted By: Framework4 Re: FDK - One Year Ago 6 - 05/16/16 06:59 AM
Originally Posted by Dandello
My muse has FINALLY gotten back from Tahiti - maybe. She still thinks it's a 'magical place'. shock

I was delighted to see this part turn up on fanfiction.net

Hopefully part seven is in progress.
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