HI

Nice part.
Lois can not control Jon and yes, she needs to talk to Clark, they need to talk and say the things that needs to be told.

Please fix this and let them feel the love again.

Next part ASAP

karla

Hi,

Great part.

LOL at the dinner line Soooo Lois

Jose

Anna,
I have to admit that I haven't read this when you first posted it but I'm really glad I've caught up to it now.

This is a very interesting situation you have going in the Lane/Kent households.

I'm really curious to see how you manage to resolve this, at least to some degree, in two more posts.

Avia

Anna,

part 3, let me see:

as engrossing as part 2 and I'm with Jose on the restaurant line. LOL.

awesome introspections smoothly melt with your storyline.

Torn-sometime irritating-but-hey! Lois

Torn-and-very-normal Clark

Me wonders how you'll get them back together. But do they really deserve it? (/me zooms to re-read first draft).

Part 4... coming ?

What the heck? This isn't a rewrite, it's a revelation! Kudos - more please!

Thanks a lot for your feedback, FoLCs!

Part 4 will be up in a bit

See ya,
AnnaBtG.